I’m just gonna make a note here that I made ANOTHER edit to b1, and that edit more so focuses on Ryo’s weapon arsenal. I just didn’t like his weapons and it was nagging at me.8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡgX1Ckr9TlN 維尼
I was looking up: “good weapons for telekinetics” or something like that and I got some ideas like: 8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡc9dfa77ihT 維尼
- Knives without handles (‘cause if they had blades the enemy could just catch them midair.)8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡLytj79JWxJ 維尼
- A rope. (Make a lasso, noose, whip, all kinds of stuff you could do with that if you really needed it.) 8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡGrvJs63Yqy 維尼
I couldn’t resist going back and editing some chapters (maybe two chapters; just changed small details) because I figured I didn’t like Ryo’s OG weapon set. It sounded lame AF.8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡYuztnkan0Z 維尼
Those were the two main things I edited, and I took out the weird “boxes of random sharp objects” because that seemed useless. 8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2KIMVQ83pj 維尼
Ryo only used his gear for two chapters in b1, so J figured it wasn’t a major plot-changing tweak to make. I’ll still add a note in book two as well before a chapter starts (maybe for tomorrow’s chapter) mentioning it just in case (b/c not everyone reads this blog).8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5lzKW51HoX 維尼
Oh! And I changed the detail of a “Skype Call” communication system to straight up radios, because the concept of the PFA’s communication system (which shouldn’t have been too hard to figure out, but oh well) was bugging me for days now and I couldn’t help it. Radios sound better anyways, like why the frick-frack was a Skype thing necessary? I don’t get the choices I make sometimes…8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡMxz1XB4uYu 維尼
Anyway, that’s all. I know I said I was gonna only make one or two edits, but hey! Screw that rule. I’m a hobbyist writer, I do what I want! (Or, well, what I need to do. I consider this something I need to do, and it’s not majorly effecting the plot.)8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡxitDvvY5CS 維尼
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