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    Hello, just here to share some of my works. Thank you in advance for taking interest. I enjoy retro gaming, I watch a lot of movie critique videos on Youtube, and I also speak, read, and write in Spanish. I'm into writing stories (science fiction), story games and poems (love/relationships). I love Choose Your Own Adventure style stories. I don't write too often though, only from time to time. I do appreciate any feedback and critiques. Follow me also on: reddit.com/user/X_Caliber1 . I also hang out on r/WritingPrompts. Thanks!
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Writing Prompt #13 Circuit To Your Heart
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[A young man is desperately fighting to save his damaged cybernetic girlfriend from dying. "Damn it! The circuits down here, t-they are all fried... It's going to take hours to fix this!" He fears the worst as he looks up at her sorrow filled face and she speaks gently to him. Her voice a soft whisper, "J-Jason, it's okay. You have to let me go now. We had great times together. But sadly, I-I will not recover from this. All my systems will simultaneously shut down in approximately one minute from now." Jason's eyes swell up with tears. She is on an operating table in his lab. He does whatever he can. But she knows his efforts are in vain. She’s prepared to die. However, Jason can’t let her go. Not now. He needs her more than ever. His hands shake because he doesn’t want to accept the truth. He’d rather work for hours on end to try and save the girl he loves. Her circuitry is badly damaged and her time is limited. Jason tried to remain composed, despite the overwhelming sense of desperation coursing through him. He tries to stabilize her delicate circuitry. Her body is just too damaged. The flickering lights from the machinery surrounding them cast eerie shadows on her face, accentuating her pale features. She lays there quietly, her synthetic eyes fixed on him. "I-I'll fix this," he muttered through gritted teeth. "I can repair the damage, I know I can." They locked eyes one final time. “I love you, Jason…”]


Write a response based on the writing prompt. Challenge your writing abilities and see where your imagination takes you.  

Rules: No limit of how long. It can even just be a sentence. You can write anything, as long as it relates to the writing prompt or even just the image attached to the prompt. Rating: G to R... I don't care!

Let others comment on your work and see what you can come up with! ​​​​​​​

** New writers that contribute a piece and participate in the prompts get an automatic follow from me. Take care everyone! ** 

** Hit me up… Got a writing prompt idea or an image you want to submit for the next one? Maybe both?? Come on! Don't keep it to yourself, send that over to me with your username and get full credit!!! @ ' [email protected] ' **

[A young man is desperately fighting to save his damaged cybernetic girlfriend from dying. "Damn it! The circuits down here, t-they are all fried... It's going to take hours to fix this!" He fears the worst as he looks up at her sorrow filled face and she speaks gently to him. Her voice a soft whisper, "J-Jason, it's okay. You have to let me go now. We had great times together. But sadly, I-I will not recover from this. All my systems will simultaneously shut down in approximately one minute from now." Jason's eyes swell up with tears. She is on an operating table in his lab. He does whatever he can. But she knows his efforts are in vain. She’s prepared to die. However, Jason can’t let her go. Not now. He needs her more than ever. His hands shake because he doesn’t want to accept the truth. He’d rather work for hours on end to try and save the girl he loves. Her circuitry is badly damaged and her time is limited. Jason tried to remain composed, despite the overwhelming sense of desperation coursing through him. He tries to stabilize her delicate circuitry. Her body is just too damaged. The flickering lights from the machinery surrounding them cast eerie shadows on her face, accentuating her pale features. She lays there quietly, her synthetic eyes fixed on him. "I-I'll fix this," he muttered through gritted teeth. "I can repair the damage, I know I can." They locked eyes one final time. “I love you, Jason…”]


Write a response based on the writing prompt. Challenge your writing abilities and see where your imagination takes you.  

Rules: No limit of how long. It can even just be a sentence. You can write anything, as long as it relates to the writing prompt or even just the image attached to the prompt. Rating: G to R... I don't care!

Let others comment on your work and see what you can come up with! ​​​​​​​

** New writers that contribute a piece and participate in the prompts get an automatic follow from me. Take care everyone! ** 

** Hit me up… Got a writing prompt idea or an image you want to submit for the next one? Maybe both?? Come on! Don't keep it to yourself, send that over to me with your username and get full credit!!! @ ' [email protected] ' **

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