x
No Plagiarism!hSoQaJxAdpmFg7tpQSoRposted on PENANA 回程嘅車上,一出大路就塞車,四條友困咗喺車龍中間,唔上唔落。8964 copyright protection209PENANA7pTaMGMF4Z 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA0bOR0acRuK
8964 copyright protection209PENANA3CtNeBwVmj 維尼
阿星用手機睇咗下路況,嘆住氣咁講:「唉!前面炒車,今晚冇十點都睇怕返唔到去。」8964 copyright protection209PENANA0DMRU9Dyof 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA8Ck4aTIm4h
8964 copyright protection209PENANASXNNNd27hP 維尼
我坐喺後座仍然有好多問題,反正塞車冇嘢做,於是就問佢哋:「你話男人老狗,點解又會肯俾人潛規則?」8964 copyright protection209PENANA0F71iYsPU5 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAwDD2Bt0dGa
8964 copyright protection209PENANAyMt7bUHKNH 維尼
阿銘答:「呢啲買賣嚟㗎姐,一個出得起錢,一個想要錢,各取所需。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAw6woxptlPf 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAuskWPfkifF
8964 copyright protection209PENANALK0hUatttr 維尼
「但我見盛強表現得好似好勉強咁?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAG2CymzCIQp 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANANjz5GCrpy9
8964 copyright protection209PENANA6nIDdgRRc3 維尼
「佢隨時唔係同志都唔出奇。」阿星百無聊賴咁握住軚講。8964 copyright protection209PENANAf7IBEyO2VQ 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAIAifr9YHAT
8964 copyright protection209PENANAV6g1DK2gSP 維尼
我聽到眼都突埋,詫異咁講:「唔係吖嘛?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAcLTVFhn3ZD 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAItKthx2Ekk
8964 copyright protection209PENANAmyheBuA47A 維尼
「好出奇咩,佢只要陪石老闆幾年就夠喺北京二環買層千幾萬嘅樓,好多人成世人打工都搵唔到咁多錢。」阿星不以為然講。8964 copyright protection209PENANAHSVbqds5U4 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANANVvAXz3yCn
8964 copyright protection209PENANAXYglSIr02F 維尼
「聽落係有啲道理。」我似乎接受唔到:「但畀著我肯定唔得。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAA1eNKDRnYu 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAW0HIccsHAk
8964 copyright protection209PENANAgYxGPXN9we 維尼
阿銘笑咗笑講:「你唔要,大把人爭崩頭。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAPwxRAoh1QG 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAFdmpzV6xn5
8964 copyright protection209PENANACpFDMCwC0I 維尼
「假如石老闆睇中你呢?」8964 copyright protection209PENANA10lwytifAP 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAfseyC1eMCg
8964 copyright protection209PENANA01yyOHm0tb 維尼
「咁呢程車你一定見我唔到。」阿銘笑住講。8964 copyright protection209PENANADb0iyOg1GV 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANANw1pyv1vJV
8964 copyright protection209PENANAYW28n3I0Bf 維尼
全車人聽完之後都笑咗,最終呢程車真係十點左右先返到工作室。8964 copyright protection209PENANAolnwC8OCOi 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAoTAix4J7XI
8964 copyright protection209PENANAwocmUqisnL 維尼
翌日,阿星又開始忙改劇本,佢當時雖然拍晒心口話會搞掂,但改起上嚟都真係大工程,三日後終於又出咗一版新嘅大綱出嚟。8964 copyright protection209PENANAlr5sf7BA4b 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA6PsnSOUHfz
8964 copyright protection209PENANAIOGL8PXog8 維尼
今次拍嘅係喜劇,但係喜劇好唔好睇,比起劇本其實更加著重喺個表演者身上,好似查理卓別林同Mr.Bean一樣係個表演者搞笑,同一個劇本搵其他人演出嚟,可能根本冇效果。8964 copyright protection209PENANAoehtpNm0Ff 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANARRu49DMuGB
8964 copyright protection209PENANAKJMzYUiHEO 維尼
特別係印象中嘅盛強畀我感覺成碌木咁,莫講話搞笑,連正常講對白都未必做得好。8964 copyright protection209PENANAw55pehCCbS 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAcMJSpXKWi0
8964 copyright protection209PENANAvwuRHRr65B 維尼
我睇咗下寫喺白板上嘅重點問阿星:「咁樣寫,佢哋收貨㗎?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAOQPrNSp5Ka 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANARYgQf5EOKw
8964 copyright protection209PENANAfQDCUS5H1W 維尼
「完全跟足要求,我諗石老闆應該會滿意呢版。」8964 copyright protection209PENANApk3VpKhHbr 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAEgFXGYaQs3
8964 copyright protection209PENANAtsC2yxHKHa 維尼
「唔係掛,宜家成個故事又散又亂啵。」我聽完實在唔明。8964 copyright protection209PENANA1sCx0kCr3z 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAr6ZG9EDGTx
8964 copyright protection209PENANAuvtepXuqls 維尼
「沙士,我哋係商業編劇嚟,老闆想要咩我哋就畀咩,開到戲我哋先賺到錢,搞藝術我哋會死㗎,你明唔明啊?」8964 copyright protection209PENANA2cRCkSwxIZ 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAs6lEyhT1e3
8964 copyright protection209PENANAwt69QaTbq6 維尼
「但都冇理由咁甩皮甩骨㗎……」8964 copyright protection209PENANA2Ft1LWUmZy 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAqL111k6yHp
8964 copyright protection209PENANAOjKsK0KsHP 維尼
阿星又解釋道:「錯啦,你睇落甩皮甩骨姐,喺石老闆眼中呢份係按足佢要求出嘅劇本,好唔好睇係其次,最緊要係啱佢心水,滿足到要求佢先會拎錢出嚟開戲,大家先有工開,明唔明?我哋唔係藝術家啊沙士,我哋只不過一班揸筆乞食嘅寫手嚟。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAIQYsF1h35g 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAvufHNHPh0l
8964 copyright protection209PENANAqqTWsLcK3M 維尼
「石老闆嘅煤礦生意,每年都唔知賺幾多億,網大投資嗰幾百萬對佢嚟講真係濕濕碎,投得呢啲劇本都係另有所圖,就算蝕錢都冇咩所謂,因為打從一開始佢就唔係為咗賺錢而嚟。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAmZ3E03d1m8 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAEWqDxCwsot
8964 copyright protection209PENANAT16Nb9P3rp 維尼
「但係……」我都係有啲於心不忍:「如果佢哋拍出嚟好難睇咁點?」8964 copyright protection209PENANACEWygUU5dv 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAsLsbnHhc8c
8964 copyright protection209PENANASlNwhA11Nu 維尼
「咁係拍嗰邊功力不足啦,到時就唔關我哋事。」8964 copyright protection209PENANA5gCt1GKOmn 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANATyd8fUTkHW
8964 copyright protection209PENANASigBko8b8j 維尼
「但係編劇個名落你㗎啵!唔驚以後冇人搵你寫咩?」8964 copyright protection209PENANA4wxrjjb7nZ 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAouA1mZLGE3
8964 copyright protection209PENANAe81hDvguWO 維尼
「邊有人睇戲會留意編劇㗎?觀眾一係就留意演員,二就係導演,三可能已經係配樂美術嗰啲。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAheA14naBff 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAwE2AoFjQ5H
8964 copyright protection209PENANAgXDoG52voU 維尼
阿星又問:「魔盜王有冇睇啊?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAxEfr2wmVbS 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA9U3wP27DaE
8964 copyright protection209PENANAB8CkPaizs4 維尼
我即刻應佢:「有!傑克船長吖嘛!超鍾意!」8964 copyright protection209PENANAfXN8ph8wfg 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAvtLc5yseFk
8964 copyright protection209PENANATkhiGjgn4m 維尼
「咁我問你,套嘢嘅編劇叫咩?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAz8N61xFP1N 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANARzjYUN1ohW
8964 copyright protection209PENANAj0WvpYbFk0 維尼
「吓?」我個腦當堂打結。8964 copyright protection209PENANAnywrn00dWU 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAyrHWCYbM8g
8964 copyright protection209PENANAyarU0DeWC9 維尼
莫講話編劇,套嘢我連導演係邊個都未知。8964 copyright protection209PENANAwBZPiZtV5A 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANACW8enXctDt
8964 copyright protection209PENANAm98wTIJv2d 維尼
阿星一見就講:「你睇!個個都淨係會記得尊尼特普,其他人搵鬼會理咩!」8964 copyright protection209PENANAAG03UNUCa1 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAlGTBQzKUVJ
8964 copyright protection209PENANAYQ24yo8MdG 維尼
我聽完以後都點頭:「你咁講都好似有啲道理……」8964 copyright protection209PENANAHsysBFY3ho 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAZm9kAKqJij
8964 copyright protection209PENANA2lvR1ZF6lL 維尼
阿星又講:「同埋冇人叫你用真名㗎嘛!」8964 copyright protection209PENANA9JkMMWI0bm 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAQoCXaYKQlG
8964 copyright protection209PENANAE5tkTLpBSn 維尼
「吓?可以唔用㗎咩?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAHs4odkGnR8 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA0mS79mKNgL
8964 copyright protection209PENANABbPIEB61RZ 維尼
「點解唔可以?藝人都可以用藝名,你做咩唔可以用其他筆名?」8964 copyright protection209PENANARDHOBFCYzW 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA3GFK4Vlj4S
8964 copyright protection209PENANA6rmS5xFN7X 維尼
我聽完放下心頭大石,笑道:「又係啵!」8964 copyright protection209PENANA3W0VcMMESj 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAFOfxnfJxav
8964 copyright protection209PENANAa8bu9mOC2l 維尼
個心放開咗啲,不斷催眠自己,從此對將來可能要靠寫爛片搵食少咗一份心理負擔。8964 copyright protection209PENANAIn3EF3T9o0 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAgxqBQB8dET
8964 copyright protection209PENANASJP0cwhFXB 維尼
結果新嘅呢版分場大綱真係同阿星所講嘅一樣,石老闆睇完之後相當滿意,阿星佢哋都可以向下一階段進發。8964 copyright protection209PENANAmVK0OiB9d2 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA4KfiXUuunB
8964 copyright protection209PENANAVaewyW0CPf 維尼
原本就應該進入劇本階段,我跟咗差唔多成個月終於可以近距離觀察一份劇本係點樣完成!8964 copyright protection209PENANARdJA30uVIP 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAR2dS5iqehZ
8964 copyright protection209PENANAHkbrVm50FZ 維尼
不枉我做咗成個月跑腿,又搵咗一個月資料,捱到呢一步證明我嘅努力係冇白費!8964 copyright protection209PENANAsO8Tcqa9Z9 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA0rODEmQzgR
8964 copyright protection209PENANAw8IUVqQlo7 維尼
正當我如常喺開會時間,打開電腦坐好準備做記錄嗰時,阿星突然同我講:「唔洗啦。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAImF7BTc4kJ 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAXSPbmUIk39
8964 copyright protection209PENANAe9cuG6txmB 維尼
我嚇咗一跳:「吓?點解唔洗?又話石老闆嗰邊過咗?」8964 copyright protection209PENANA6DQ5fFN6Jr 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA1aoZZilRig
8964 copyright protection209PENANAevieDvomFx 維尼
「係過咗啊!我意思係跟住落嚟你唔洗幫手啦!」8964 copyright protection209PENANATCtl9X0PTp 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAaNLpQZZ5SH
8964 copyright protection209PENANAUBWf05rQ0Y 維尼
我聽完仲震驚,即刻追問:「我係咪做錯咗乜嘢?」8964 copyright protection209PENANAjNvAW9EoDU 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANACtWtQg60WH
8964 copyright protection209PENANAb1ZVKxBaFN 維尼
「唔係啊!乜你諗嘢咁負面嘅!」阿星皺眉講。8964 copyright protection209PENANAwHXYISYJfq 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAOjROc8eHMX
8964 copyright protection209PENANAxu7HjpIO7f 維尼
「咁你失驚無神走埋嚟叫我唔洗再幫手,我咁諗都好正常啫……」8964 copyright protection209PENANAYxppmXcygE 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA3dbrBQ50qF
8964 copyright protection209PENANATF27D35dp0 維尼
「唔係你諗嗰樣。」阿星又講:「係導演叫嘅,佢話你差唔多返香港,叫我哋休息一下,陪你出去玩幾日。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAw7J89dYymo 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANADehGT9pNxx
8964 copyright protection209PENANALgqlxBnTaN 維尼
我睇下手機日期,原來不知不覺間已經嚟到十二月尾,一個月實習期差唔多到,我都係時候要返香港交實習報告。8964 copyright protection209PENANA2I8RYruI59 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAyXaKCcyEWk
8964 copyright protection209PENANACYetqzjafZ 維尼
冇諗過呢段日日俾人點去做嘢嘅日子會過得咁快,雖然絕大部份時間都留咗喺工作室入面,但學到嘅嘢我相信比上堂三年學到嘅仲要多。8964 copyright protection209PENANAT4Og5FiZMA 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAEKfqDkKgg6
8964 copyright protection209PENANAVheeQuvQwD 維尼
明明攰到死,但真係要走嗰下居然會有啲唔捨得。8964 copyright protection209PENANAaylwfZEp3W 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA0QS9rZOE3s
8964 copyright protection209PENANAXfYVDm2LI6 維尼
阿星見我呆咗喺度,於是講:「嚟緊幾日工作室都會休息,你想去邊度玩即管開聲。」8964 copyright protection209PENANAIduNjBDktY 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANA9xi6ZLh8sb
8964 copyright protection209PENANArMct4si5AT 維尼
講完佢就返咗入房,得返我一個喺客廳。8964 copyright protection209PENANA1EQjMHusiT 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANApDHFLc6BuW
8964 copyright protection209PENANANZ9tvwsCpP 維尼
213Please respect copyright.PENANAI6hy3fhIbz
8964 copyright protection209PENANAxXhdUfyalX 維尼
172.70.130.62
ns 172.70.130.62da2