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下有精闢分析心得,有興趣的人可以看看(笑)64Please respect copyright.PENANAdR55gpX591
因為內容實在是太過犀利我也沒什麼需要補充的地方了,所以有仔細品味這篇文的人可以看來玩玩(?)64Please respect copyright.PENANAISCcoy3SQo
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以下是友人(亂套關係)DUCK寄給某梅的完整內容:64Please respect copyright.PENANAW0HsqHBt4a
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阿梅~我是Duck,依約來交渣..不、是心得!64Please respect copyright.PENANA5mZHrBChwF
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先讓我發洩一下(笑)64Please respect copyright.PENANA00p5VprNU8
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我很不滿,甚至有點生悶氣,對一護。64Please respect copyright.PENANAoo1jmJoFym
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chap08裡一護自白對白哉的感情「放的很深很深。深到無法想像沒有對方的生命。」,可是我看不出來。64Please respect copyright.PENANAb8G10Vlv1x
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那麼輕率說出「分手」的是誰,那麼直接說出「本來就沒什麼」的又是誰?!64Please respect copyright.PENANA0aofsKguQJ
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沒看錯,我用的是「輕率」兩個字。64Please respect copyright.PENANAiAprxzTzuY
鑽牛角尖自哀自憐一番導出個分手對大家都好的結論;戀愛不是一個人單方面情感的傳送啊,在忽視對方想法自行決定不是輕率是什麼?64Please respect copyright.PENANA3xW2EpCgS4
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很常見的橋段,思緒跟著主角在走的話很容易就會陷入主角心理狀態跟著哀傷起來。偏偏老娘看到後一點同理心都沒有,只想狠狠唸這顆草莓一頓。64Please respect copyright.PENANAQzdHvb3hRG
不過、64Please respect copyright.PENANApcLYcxNqfy
阿梅,妳成功了。這是我第一次為白哉喊冤(笑)。64Please respect copyright.PENANAlVDIuFkDOl
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來吐一下《降露》連載時就產生的渣,以下主觀意識強烈、部分陰暗想法有。64Please respect copyright.PENANAEgiMjJehg9
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依文中時間先後順序:64Please respect copyright.PENANArIVnz9Q2HO
1.一護聽到他人對同性戀情的評論,引起潛藏的心理禁錮—違背所謂常理的罪惡感、害怕被他人發現後的歧視眼光以及對白哉曾娶妻的妒意。64Please respect copyright.PENANAzr7S2X4a0D
2.在往朽木家途中遇到緋真,繼而引發後續事件。64Please respect copyright.PENANAWofOlTcsxQ
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雖然故事是以「緋真」為起因也以「緋真」畫下圓滿的句點,但是私以為緋真的出現只是個引爆點,潛藏的是一護對兩人同性別的不安。64Please respect copyright.PENANA9AZ2NH3HR8
(創作反應著部份真實,但同性愛探討不是我要吐的渣,略過。)64Please respect copyright.PENANAhpRxyuqi83
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看完chap07時我就在想要是這份不安爆發出來這兩人會走上怎樣的路?一度以為這會是所謂悲劇(壞)。64Please respect copyright.PENANAZQABJ6lzPW
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故事裡並沒有清楚說明兩人是如何在一起,僅提到是露琪亞硬架著一護面對白哉的告白回應,所以我假設這兩人並沒有就這部分深談過。64Please respect copyright.PENANAVHN0AC5n3u
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那顆白菜也許認為理所當然,成精的白菜想法不是我等小民能揣測的,再說家主威嚴拿出來誰敢不從?64Please respect copyright.PENANA8YuCfQbdL0
(每每看到其他作品中白菜被家族長老從中阻撓、威脅而和草莓分開我都想大吼”死白菜你家主幹到還要看人臉色他X的你是幹假的阿!” 離題了=w=)64Please respect copyright.PENANAGrFDINPOMF
那顆愛鑽牛角尖的草莓大概就是把這件事悶在心裡,提也不提半字。64Please respect copyright.PENANAs8mZMbwaTQ
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正好緋真事件是個契機,讓潛藏的部分一次引爆出來。64Please respect copyright.PENANAwmC4s0WtDw
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看到緋真說:「愛人吶,其實只是很簡單的。」我很開心。64Please respect copyright.PENANAkeZwm8xPKH
沒錯,雖然帶點天真但是愛人不就是這回事?在意身分、對方過去的戀情甚至是相同生理構造,但是會因為這些就不愛了嗎?64Please respect copyright.PENANAEpJyz3Jrfz
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看到經緋真開釋後一護伸手拉住白哉的手那幕,我想這兩個人應該沒問題了。牽你的手,我和你一同面對所有風風雨雨,人生路上,有你同行。64Please respect copyright.PENANAAv4swsDRVX
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要幸福阿,兩位〒▽〒(揮手帕)64Please respect copyright.PENANAWEfySv39jP
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刪減多次,我果然還是適合走搞笑路線=w=64Please respect copyright.PENANAUyuci1Dsuh
要鞭請小力一點,某鴨現在腦袋空空經不起打T__T64Please respect copyright.PENANAGY58RStyDA
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OK下面是某廢渣作者決定要來補的廢渣趕稿佚錄所以大家可以按上一頁離開了......喂喂等一下我開玩笑的啊(拉住)64Please respect copyright.PENANA6kCE8jcv90
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其實打出本篇文一開始就是因為我生活週遭下起的一場雨,連著三日不停的下,一邊看著窗外的迷濛一邊一字一字的刻畫出的”降露”,其實也是我對生活週遭的一種心境吧,很巧的是這篇文章寫了兩個月告終,這兩個月內雨總是斷斷續續的下著像是支持著我這個挖坑王的努力(噗),最後打上結尾的時候天空也幾乎散去了烏雲,還給世界一片陽光--當然最後的結尾是我的腦袋所能詮釋的出最好的收尾了,緋真在最後終是會離去的,已逝者永遠也回不來,所以被留下的人們只能用著不同的方式憑弔,然後用自己所能找到最好,最心安理得的方式繼續活下去。64Please respect copyright.PENANAaXAfoFTQW7
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關於裡面同性戀的議題,其實也是我生活週遭的一種反射(笑)很奇妙的我的生活週遭腐女不少,但是最令我意外的是有很多(男)人竟然都是同性戀--這並沒有什麼好驕傲的我必須說,因為在我看見他們一個一個對愛人的渴望傷害與掙扎,我只能說他們很可悲,同性戀即使在日本廣大的腐女界裡稀疏平常,但是即使是日本這種事情多數也只能地下化,更別提揚明開放自由的台灣,即使不禁止但是大人總帶給很多錯誤的印象--然後他們就被傷害了,無辜的。64Please respect copyright.PENANAuodv2x5eTY
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上面DUCK有提到的--”愛人呐,其實是很簡單的。”64Please respect copyright.PENANADRVNGETm9o
是的,愛難道就不是這樣麼?世上有太多人都為了”為賦新詞強說愁”,愛情於是變的庸俗--我必須說現在的人已經不會有像一護這樣愛到心坎裡收不回了的情感,愛情一直都不是高潔,至少我看到有用盡心機換得不圓滿的愛,甚至是不懂愛的人愚昧的尋求種種慰藉然後將之拋棄--那實在是一種可悲。64Please respect copyright.PENANAIXe51iCzsA
一護的草率我只得說因為劇情的關係我把他寫的太多愁善感了(對不起...),因為我一直對緋真這個爆點充滿興趣,到底是放手了各自思念至終還是夾在前情死纏不放?我想一護還是會選擇後者吧,因為他是個這麼貼心善解人意的好孩子(笑)64Please respect copyright.PENANAitkIuuUR1J
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恩,最後我要打的應該就這些了,謝謝有看完某梅亂吐的廢渣感言的所有人,謝謝至今無論有沒有出現讓我知道各位的支持,謝謝64Please respect copyright.PENANAmV8rp6d7zh
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