第1點335Please respect copyright.PENANAQPJpbCatBc
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。335Please respect copyright.PENANAvVFR49KQf6
第2點335Please respect copyright.PENANATNMjQnHcM2
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。335Please respect copyright.PENANAI20V4M0W5r
第3點335Please respect copyright.PENANAP4s4NYqJtM
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAdc1HCej6Dh
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。335Please respect copyright.PENANA26MTN9xlBl
「嗯──」335Please respect copyright.PENANATKi9JnfL9b
「該怎麼辦呢?」335Please respect copyright.PENANAjEucAf9hU1
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。335Please respect copyright.PENANAND3Kb7hrNt
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAwUKVEgZSfP
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。335Please respect copyright.PENANAg3oQt228mQ
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。335Please respect copyright.PENANAsBPgOvO8ly
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAJpaYld7YfC
米莉亞拿到一封信。335Please respect copyright.PENANAjcx3Yer4a2
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAO5HprCtajL
三河願表示。335Please respect copyright.PENANAblYYoc8hqq
「那可是一封情書耶。」335Please respect copyright.PENANA65alqCw2C1
第4點335Please respect copyright.PENANAUPZ28GB2Gr
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。335Please respect copyright.PENANAjY387BCj1p