一、請簡單自我介紹，列出喜歡的作品跟創作類型：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5xzUcaN4iz
你好,我是泗楓,從國中開始寫小說至今227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeyvwprFtWt
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二、請簡述本次活動想提出討論的作品內容角色設定：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyUZpSoErOU
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劇情重要衝突與阻礙（請提供作品章節連結）：魔王與勇者方是對立 但是勇者方是不道德的一方227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5vmE6TXN9j
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主角目標與成長：找到魔王並協助消滅勇者方227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdjBrlRZpX4
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想提出討論的開車章節（含預備車）：每一篇的18+內容227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxioJaWkMWR
自覺開車不順的點（整體論，非特定章節）：開起來感覺像是傳動軸有問題 卡卡的 說不上來哪裡有問題227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJPI4wVLa7a
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◎ 有開車但覺得不太順暢的新米車手227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLUMrVGAkS1
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原本想寫的車但沒開成的篇幅，請寫300字概念大綱，227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlHhEP2iDuH
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突然一陣風括起，我看克萊娜微微顫抖的肩膀，將他們給我穿的西裝外套脫下給她披上，她有些訝異的看了看我後，便將外套往內拉包裹住自己說：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz7yHP4m4yD
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「謝謝你勇者大人，您真的很溫柔呢。召喚到您真的是我國最大的福祉。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTQGpnzoTt9
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「克萊娜小姐......」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGuaSGzuS3l
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「勇者......克里斯大人。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3IUXwaRUau
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我輕輕扶起她的下巴，慢慢地親吻她濕潤朱紅的唇。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI3nNprDr6W
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「嗯，克里斯大人，您下午說的事情......嗯啾，我們去房間說吧。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlG8VLV8vxo
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我一邊品嘗著她柔嫩且溫潤的雙唇，一邊將她抱起從一旁小道走回我的房間，將門關上以及窗簾拉上後，我便將她放在床上。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡilad6iWhYX
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「克里斯......大人，姆嗯，等我，阿恩～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvRsUT8XzwX
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「沒事，我幫妳脫吧。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNVJwsnUouq
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我將自己的衣服褲子瞬間解開脫掉後，便上到了床，一邊持續的親吻一邊利索的將她的禮服後的拉鍊往下拉，此時她傲人的雙胸挾帶著兩朵白峰上的紅暈及小巧紅潤的尖頭。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFf3hs3NqB
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看到後我便順勢的從她白皙的頸部一挑逗至她敏感且柔潤的雙胸。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVD3kemare8
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「啊～克里斯大人，乳頭不可以，嗯......啊嗯，不可以咬啦～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGtiKqDIlZJ
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用門牙輕輕的左右咬著她並且持續像是吸卡住珍珠的粗吸管一樣用力，一隻手搓揉另一球之外，另一隻手緩緩的伸到她敏感且似乎剛剛有處理過、摸上去還有些渣人的陰毛處。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlzNawdlU0h
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「啊嗯，這樣吸不會有母乳的～，除非......」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOzRPHgYdVV
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她很大方的打開了大腿，我的手也停在了她的小穴門口，她的手撐著她的大腿，嬌喘的說道：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ir96PtzeR
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「克里斯大人能把你雄偉的肉棒放入這個淫亂的小穴裡......」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlYu7akaVMo
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「嗯？我沒有聽清楚妳的需求喔，我沒有打算讓妳懷上我的小孩耶，我只想吸這對該死又舒服的奶子，妳最好在詳細的描述一下妳的需求比較好喔。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRl2TXv5zeB
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我撐起身子，看著她嬌喘且淫亂的表情，我笑著一邊說一邊用早已勃起很久的肉棒貼近她的肉穴附近來回的轉，就是不插入。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlmbQqduGKD
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看著她似乎很著急但是也不知道要說些甚麼，而她要說話時我便一嘴親住她的唇，並且將舌頭粗暴的伸進她的嘴裡一直攪和著。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkQdOOOfFAo
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「嗚嗯......啾......哈啊......哈啊嗯～克里蘇.....大人......嗚嗯！啾.......嗚啾......哈啊哈......克利斯大人，我.......我......嗯～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFjAFqO1OsS
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「妳不說清楚我怎麼知道妳要做甚麼呢？克萊娜小姐？」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3MUVn0Dj1a
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我伸著蛇頭緩緩的離開，並從她的舌上拉出一條長長的細絲，她像是失了神的說：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxDD33x1Wag
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「克里斯大人......您真的......很厲害呢......人家已經......去了好幾次......明明都還沒插入......嗯嗯～克里斯大人，您的手指！啊嗯～～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8sARbrIgJH
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「是喔？我確認看看？」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiSmvbwhdIQ
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沒等她說完我便將兩隻手指緩緩的滑入她的肉穴之中，然後在裏頭一上一下的往前撫摸著。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoMliwxOBqO
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「等一下克里斯大人，我才剛去，啊嗯！那裡！不行！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡChbIsAfHDP
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突然食指碰到一個點，她便叫了出來，並且噴流出很多透明色的液體。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTckV7WgtqF
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「齁齁～看來是被我找到了喔～克萊娜小姐～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ35fgJKcFJt
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我挪到她小穴的前方，撐開她的大腿，用肉棒抵著她的肉穴門口說道：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLpIeCKQiz8
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「克萊娜小姐～我～進來囉～」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXsREvdDvl
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「等......等一下克里斯大......喔嗯！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmgaOnERfsP
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我一口氣往裡面一頂，龜頭的感覺是頂到了一個肉壁的感覺，但是我的肉棒還有一些些在外面。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq6bZXhTe2g
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「嗯～看來是高潮到子宮下垂了，這該怎麼辦才好啊克萊娜小姐？」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUfw0PVYrT9
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「啊嗯......克里斯先生，我想歇會兒可以.....姆嗯！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSxxMHGMcbU
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「當然是不行啊，妳要幫我想想看怎麼讓我的老二呆在妳的小淫穴裡，不然我的老二露出來的部分可沒地方擺啊！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPFYaubiKPM
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我一邊說一邊抽插著，並且在剛剛我摸到她敏感的部位我還適時地用龜頭邊的皺褶去頂，她的表情從原本很享受變得全身無力，現在的她已經是成大自行躺在床上，像是洩了氣的人偶一般。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCqm64Sewsv
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「欸妳這樣我都還沒玩夠妳就坍了，不行，得想想辦法。門外的女僕會治癒術的進來一下好嗎？」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPsC6zY0Is9
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一個看上去年紀約二十初的女僕小姐走進來，淡定的說：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJLddJq8bJt
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「請問有何吩咐？勇者大人？」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9hTpQaCCbE
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「給克萊娜小姐上治癒或是回復術，她失神了。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgySlASoK9X
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「等......等一」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhcpUbco7HE
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克萊娜似乎想說甚麼，我便將她抱起，呈互相對坐的姿勢，我抱著轉向女僕說：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXr49KVl5UI
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「ＯＫ，可以連我都一起放喔。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9RNpva30rP
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「好的，大治癒術！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpUmrwsb6Tk
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施展完後，我感覺剛剛因為跳舞跟對克萊娜前面的動作所耗的體力都全部恢復，而我也發現克萊娜正緊緊的抱著我，並且在床上的腿還努力的撐著，似乎很怕一失去支點就會被頂穿的感覺。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbI33pgoC2I
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「克萊娜，我覺得我們似乎很合得來耶，妳的肉穴、胸跟唇真的都超棒的。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvygUcFzsnX
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「是......是嗎？謝謝勇者大人的愛戴，但是我身為大祭師，明天還有一些公事需要處理，所以今天就先這......等等克利斯大人，現在不可以起身！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnzF5V0f8ev
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我抱著她站了起來，緩緩移動到窗台旁的牆壁，我用手抵著她兩隻腳跨著的地方，她則是緊緊的抱著我說道：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp7QrXu3S0C
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「克里斯大人！拜託您我想要休息，啊嗯啊嗯～啊嗯，嗚嗯.......啾嗯......哈啊......克里斯.......大人......不要......拜託您.......」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqgK72ev9zF
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我一邊抽插著她一邊將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡不斷攪弄。227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbdBJIqOHnH
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最後，我感覺要射出來前，我坐回床上，她的腳正想要放在床上時，我便連她的腳跟身體一同抱住，她用失神又詫異的表情看著我時，我便輕輕的在她耳邊說：227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3bgGLQCyHv
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「妳想要的寶寶汁來囉，不要漏接了。」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEk8Iz9yr57
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「等等，現在射的話我會.......嗚啾嗯！」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbnLy7OLcL0
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