Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs1ivFVfW2T
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI5bN5ljcrT
Grammar: 5 points368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbvjaPwSh0u
Creativity: 10 points368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtChJKXVn36
Emotion: 5 points368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHEWIZazHIa
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmbJxkjzeJ
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpqV8s255VE
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxpnjUMEh5E
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6B01muRSgM
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5I7kc6OjMk
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWsSvrR6H2k
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnQ5r8Ur7iY
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvnQvf0Hw7t
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM3w9VMHp3H
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrH4iPavKRM
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgCuGZtHrXL
Total: 21 pts368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHUZm2UqrWz
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTBwbkilr0b
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvzNZGItU9C
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia368Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH5ekfWe7uD
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