There have been so many great entries, it was hard to pick winners. So, before I list the winners, I want to give a more detailed review of each writers work. If you don't feel like reading it, feel free to skip to the end, where I will list the winners.692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnXmcB7eXhw
RAMENNOODLESX: Well done, I really enjoyed reading this, there was plenty of details and lots of emotion and dialogue involved. It was a bit of a read, but well work it, right down to the end. I loved how you made it so that James was unable to touch anything tangible. Your portrayed your characters relationships well. Great Job.692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQfWdpPUgYS
NAKYSHA: Well done, your approach and description of the afterlife in the beginning was interesting, and I like how you ended the story, with Jeff being able to watch his family, talk to his grandson and later be rejoined by his wife. Very touching, great job.692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqG0cxhNQw6
ElIZABETHBECKER: Well done, short but simple, and sometimes that is all that is needed. I like how Alexander decided not to use his 10 minutes,and it made sense for him to do so, in a way. Great job692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwqjzDMLNpU
BUBUWINTER:Well done, the way you took into perspective the halves was interesting, and caught my attention from early on. I love how he choose to say nothing at all, instead just giving her a push on the swing. The way that he died for his sister was very touching indeed. Great Job692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU9tl4FYvOW
SAR-LOW:Well done. Sometimes less is more, very touching story. Paints a nice simple image, while leaving room for imagination, great job692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbH4GXoyFGx
CORRUPTEDPURITY:Well done. I liked your approach of having the character look over and run through the available options. While a different approach than the other stories in the contest, i found it interesting that the character had not made a difference in anyone's life, which may have been better. Good descriptions, well done.692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCAetJMG9gp
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Picking winners was hard. I took into consideration plot, grammar, spelling errors, and a few other basic things. Thank you for participating. 692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMamPoZIfox
The Winners are:692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWysw1TQPKc
First place:BUBUWINTER692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbC8bLa1aj7
Second Place:RAMENNOODLESX692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhBgaUWLzZJ
Third place:NAKYSHA692Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJYNL1SpAa0
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