The Lands of Ralosia: The Desert
Corri and her friends take a shortcut across the great desert aboard a sand-ship, with the Mecarne Temp's help. Complications arise, and they end up trapped in an ancient place buried in the sands. A temple with some relation to the Goddess. Corri feels some connection to this place as well. All the while a figure with unknown motives follows the group.
The Lands of Ralosia series takes place in a world with individuals capable of incredible feats of strength, animals of abnormal size, and races of people with distinct anatomy and cultures.
This story acts as the 9th entry in the Lands of Ralosia series. I typically try to write each story in such a way that it can be read without reading the others, but this one is definitely strengthened by reading other entries.
The story that precedes this one is called the The Lands of Ralosia: The Weld Mountains
If you want to read a story which contains elements that come in to play in this one, check out The Lands of Ralosia: Earth & Sky
When the modern era's 15 minutes of fame are up, and only violence remained. A man walking a road only satan himself could have carved. A violent past shaping his bounty, as stronger bounty hunters stalk him in every town he arrives. His dad trained him since infantry, now at 16 he's referred to as "locote."
His mother has died in the mist of the violence, his dad who is carrying a bounty of twenty million is nowhere to be seen. He only has his twin sister, who he is determined to move her into "El Rio" the richest town in these lands. Even if it means building up his bounty, and letting her turn him in to get the money. What will happen when he sees his father? Or Will he get caught before he can even begin this journey?
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