Tiki and Alesha blended into society over the years. Their powers faded as they didn't use them. They realize how much they wanted them back in their last year of high school. They go on an adventure to gain them back and defeat a new evil threat.
I wrote this story for another publication and it didn't get accepted so here it is on here. What can I do to improve, is this really bad or just okay?
The story details the journey of boy who seeks to the power of magic, a skill lost to myth and forgotten by most. He's on an expedition to one of the last places of the old magical world, the Aion Temple.
Wasn't happy with how the 1st go was looking so here's another go at it to try and sort it out while placing things in order based on what type of beast they are.
There are the following:
> Celestial: These creatures are very holy and often have a pull to destroy creatures that are unholy/impure based on their soul. Most common type of these are Angels and Spirits, as well as some Guardians which could also be spiritual or physical.
> Demon: These creatures are not holy and are injured by holy things, or commonly are. They were made by a being called The Shadowed One. Often they follow closely to The Shadowed One's orders and control, like killing humans and placing fear in other races, but some have broken their will free of The Shadowed One. Yes they are still demons but their minds are their own and are clear. They still feel the urges to kill innocent beings but do not act on them. They can fall and do this from a state called Bloodlust. Some races are more easy to fall to Bloodlust than others.
> Normal: Aphelia has normal animals you'd find in our world but they also have creatures that are normal for them that are not Celestial or Demon.
> Mythical: These creatures are those found in our own mythology. One example would be a hydra or a manticore. Vampires would be another as would werewolves.
The types above are what they are. Their names are their technical names and nicknames are the alternate name they are known by, if any. What is listed is the general commonly known information about each creature. Each individual creature may vary depending on independent factors, such as where they were raised, how they were raised, how strong their will is to resist the urges of causing chaos/violence from The Shadowed One, and so forth. Appearance may also vary depending on their strength as some are able to hide among humans by disguising themselves to appear as perfectly human.
Now, let us begin.
This is a piece of my Magic Guide I'm working on. I thought I'd share what the elements are and their information with you all. I hope you all enjoy.
My fanfic for Wings Of Fire.
A young animus dragon, one of many in the SeaWing royal family, leaves her underwater palace to join Jade Mountain Academy and quickly finds herself caught up in a frightening mystery involving a mysterious animus RainWing, a rare LeafWing, a bitter MudWing and a very strange Ice/SkyWing.
Forever is a long time...And many people wish for that forever...But what if you have that forever...And yet, there is always something missing...And then one day...Someone came to your life that fills the void of emptiness in your life...But then...It just vanish...How do you get past that pain?Knowing that you could have done something to prevent it...This is the story of my life...
When best friends Blair and Zander are caught for selling an antique, magic sword, they are swept into the chaotic world of magic law and find themselves entangled in a mess of trouble. To escape an eternity in the mines of the magic world, they take on a near impossible alternate. Taking down the Faerie King of Tenebris' Empire. With the aid of two Iustitias (a race of warriors who are basically the magic police according to Zander), Cleo and Maximus, and a not so helpful vampire named Diego, they will embark on a dangerous yet exciting adventure to save their lives and the hidden magic world. But the most difficult thing is survival. They will learn more about themselves, discover their pasts, develop relationships and test their limits. And most importantly, they will be joining the Out Worlds, a magic world hidden from the mortal world. . .
This is Book 2 as copied over from it's 1st revision form from my Deviantart. I will be also doing in trying to break up any chapters that could be broken up into shorter forms.
This continues from Book 1 with Alura now on a quest to find out what Amoxious was talking about the mysterious Nightrayne. There is also a family reunion she did not expect to happen.
I hope readers enjoy and as before, any comments about how something could be better will help me with the refining process as I do plan to publish this series on Amazon one day in the future.
This story was originally created back in 2008 and 2010. It began being revised as of 2015 I believe it was. The story follows our main lead as she tries to save what she holds dear. There is magic, mystery and even some Gods and Goddesses. There are some scenes of fighting and in further chapters, should I post them here, may have one or two words that could bring me to raise a warning at the start.
The story takes place in my realm of Aphelia which boarders our realm. Due to this, Aphelia residents do have technology that matches our modern conveniences. There are 9 regions in Aphelia and this story takes place in region 3.
I hope you all enjoy.
The forces of magic in the world are on the brink of a war that could bring about the end of civilization, or so it seems. When a powerful Venefica, or magic wielder, who grew up isolated from her kin, escapes the Indignor castle on the eve of her execution day, she retreats into the wilds in hope of finding her kind. However, she must cast her hatred for the crown aside and return to the dustlands of Indignor if there is to be any chance of rebuilding her world.