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necromancy

Isabelle Quilty
13Mins Each
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Smoke, Gold and the Dancing Dead
Updated Mar 26, 2017
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In an alternate 1943, the ability to bring the dead back to life, otherwise known as Necromancy was discovered twenty years prior and has now become a commercialised business. Other magic wielders also surfaced, known as the Heavenly Artisans and the Witch Doctors, capable of manipulating and materialising weapons and shields from sources known as the Golden Threadand the Black Thorn.Fleur is the most powerful of these Necromancers, until new wielders appear, using their red thread to take her estate and lover by force.

[Cover art belonging to Holly Conrad - @CommanderHolly]

Fantasy
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Smoke, Gold and the Dancing Dead

In an alternate 1943, the ability to bring the dead back to life, otherwise known as Necromancy was discovered twenty years prior and has now become a commercialised business. Other magic wielders also surfaced, known as the Heavenly Artisans and the Witch Doctors, capable of manipulating and materialising weapons and shields from sources known as the Golden Threadand the Black Thorn.Fleur is the most powerful of these Necromancers, until new wielders appear, using their red thread to take her estate and lover by force.

[Cover art belonging to Holly Conrad - @CommanderHolly]

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Molly Faith
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Godsgate
Updated Jan 20, 2020
PG-13
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In the war-torn kingdom of Tavela, Princess Azoah Espere, plagued by a dark voice that inspires dark urges, finds her world colliding with that of the Sendika's--a criminal gang living in the city's slums. With a tyrannical king on the throne, dead men walking, an angry god, a vengeful witch, and a mind-control serum known only as the dashee vae,Azoah soon realises that not only the fate of kingdoms hang in the balance, but also entire worlds.

A little info about me:

Godsgate is a novel I've been writing since I was sixteen--four years ago now. It's been through draft after draft (the first of which will never, ever see the light of day again), and name after name (Deadterra, The Bone King, The Realm of Gods and Ghosts).

I feel this story has reached a point now where, although it's not nearly ready to be sent to agents for querying, it isready to be read by other people--people who will perhaps have insights that I don't. So, please, if anyone out there reads this, I would be immensely grateful for any feedback you can offer, whether it's critical or not. I would also love to return the favour! I have many wonderful people in my life, but very few who are also writers, so sometimes I feel a little isolated in that regard.

So, if you like witches, anti-heroes, dark magic, dragons, and crazy royals, this might be the story for you.

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Godsgate

In the war-torn kingdom of Tavela, Princess Azoah Espere, plagued by a dark voice that inspires dark urges, finds her world colliding with that of the Sendika's--a criminal gang living in the city's slums. With a tyrannical king on the throne, dead men walking, an angry god, a vengeful witch, and a mind-control serum known only as the dashee vae,Azoah soon realises that not only the fate of kingdoms hang in the balance, but also entire worlds.

A little info about me:

Godsgate is a novel I've been writing since I was sixteen--four years ago now. It's been through draft after draft (the first of which will never, ever see the light of day again), and name after name (Deadterra, The Bone King, The Realm of Gods and Ghosts).

I feel this story has reached a point now where, although it's not nearly ready to be sent to agents for querying, it isready to be read by other people--people who will perhaps have insights that I don't. So, please, if anyone out there reads this, I would be immensely grateful for any feedback you can offer, whether it's critical or not. I would also love to return the favour! I have many wonderful people in my life, but very few who are also writers, so sometimes I feel a little isolated in that regard.

So, if you like witches, anti-heroes, dark magic, dragons, and crazy royals, this might be the story for you.

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Solo Work