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peter799
6Mins Each
6
ISSUES
01. The Murder Incident
Updated Oct 7, 2016
PG-13 Completed
24
3787
9
Crime
Suspense

How do you solve a case where the death occurred twenty storey high inside a locked room where the only ways of escape are a window that leads to a fall straight down to the ground with no ledges or fire-escapes, and a door that was locked from the inside?

How do you do it when you don't even know howthe victim was killed?

1st in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

This is my very first detective story that I wrote in 2012. I had published this earlier here at Penana but had removed it. So, here it is again.

The story is 6 chapters long and already completed. I'll upload a chapter a day for the next 5 days. Hope you readers like it. :)

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01. The Murder Incident

How do you solve a case where the death occurred twenty storey high inside a locked room where the only ways of escape are a window that leads to a fall straight down to the ground with no ledges or fire-escapes, and a door that was locked from the inside?

How do you do it when you don't even know howthe victim was killed?

1st in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

This is my very first detective story that I wrote in 2012. I had published this earlier here at Penana but had removed it. So, here it is again.

The story is 6 chapters long and already completed. I'll upload a chapter a day for the next 5 days. Hope you readers like it. :)

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peter799
6Mins Each
5
ISSUES
03. The Birthday Incident
Updated Nov 3, 2016
PG-13 Completed
15
2891
2
Crime
Suspense

Birthday or deathday? A man is stabbed to death when the lights go out during a birthday celebration. And Paul, Adrian's friends, stands accused of the murder. Adrian knows Paul is incapable of such a cold-hearted deed but how will he prove it?

Third in the series of cases involving Adrian.

This is the fourth story that I wrote involving Adrian and was supposed to be the fourth in the series. However, the actual third story is as of yet still incomplete. So, this shall be the third in the series for now.

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03. The Birthday Incident

Birthday or deathday? A man is stabbed to death when the lights go out during a birthday celebration. And Paul, Adrian's friends, stands accused of the murder. Adrian knows Paul is incapable of such a cold-hearted deed but how will he prove it?

Third in the series of cases involving Adrian.

This is the fourth story that I wrote involving Adrian and was supposed to be the fourth in the series. However, the actual third story is as of yet still incomplete. So, this shall be the third in the series for now.

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3Mins Each
27
ISSUES
A Game of Murder
Updated Oct 19, 2016
PG-13 On Break
109
10128
54
Crime
Suspense

After receiving a mysterious call from an unknown caller, Adrian, a detective, is kidnapped and locked inside a mansion with eleven other people. The same caller later tells everyone remotely about their purpose in the mansion; they will each be killed one by one, a death per day unless the detective can catch him/her. For the caller, it is a game. A game of murder.

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A Game of Murder

After receiving a mysterious call from an unknown caller, Adrian, a detective, is kidnapped and locked inside a mansion with eleven other people. The same caller later tells everyone remotely about their purpose in the mansion; they will each be killed one by one, a death per day unless the detective can catch him/her. For the caller, it is a game. A game of murder.

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peter799
2Mins Each
10
ISSUES
04. The Shower Incident
Updated Sep 26, 2014
PG-13 Completed
23
3251
0
Crime
Suspense

A woman is found dead in a shower by a housekeeper in a hotel. The housekeeper contacts her friend Peter and requests that he call his friend Adrian to help investigate the case. Adrian is a private investigator who is well respected by the police department of the city. See how he unravels the case and finds the murderer.

This a short whodunit that you can finish in one sitting. Rated PG-13 because of themes of murder.

4th in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

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04. The Shower Incident

A woman is found dead in a shower by a housekeeper in a hotel. The housekeeper contacts her friend Peter and requests that he call his friend Adrian to help investigate the case. Adrian is a private investigator who is well respected by the police department of the city. See how he unravels the case and finds the murderer.

This a short whodunit that you can finish in one sitting. Rated PG-13 because of themes of murder.

4th in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

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peter799
7Mins Each
4
ISSUES
02. The Restaurant Incident
Updated Oct 18, 2014
PG-13 Completed
19
1964
0
Crime
Suspense

A romantic dinner date takes a dark twist when a man is murdered in the very restaurant that Antei and his date, Alessa, are in and the accused is none other than Alessa. Antei knows Alessa is innocent and must seek the help of his detective friend Adrian to clear Alessa of the crime and find out who the real murderer is.

2nd in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

Another story I wrote two years ago and published here as is without any edits. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, feel free to leave a review.

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02. The Restaurant Incident

A romantic dinner date takes a dark twist when a man is murdered in the very restaurant that Antei and his date, Alessa, are in and the accused is none other than Alessa. Antei knows Alessa is innocent and must seek the help of his detective friend Adrian to clear Alessa of the crime and find out who the real murderer is.

2nd in the series of cases solved by Adrian.

Another story I wrote two years ago and published here as is without any edits. If you have any suggestions or criticisms, feel free to leave a review.

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Solo Work