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傑特帕斯
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傑特帕斯 on 藍橋春雪的書評服務
再來是場景,同樣在沒有畫面輔助下,作者是帶領讀者踏進一個全白的空間,作者追加敘述,空間中才會增加布景,沒有描述到的地方依然是一片空白。像是進入樹林,樹有多高?有多少?疏密會影響光線,那角色們的視線如何?是屬於闊葉林還是針葉林?腳下會是踩著一堆樹葉還是潮濕的泥土?角色們聽到、看到、聞到什麼,他們五感所體會,就會是讀者所體會的。並不一定要寫得非常詳細,但要給予讀者足以建構整個環境的資訊,以及作者想讓讀者聚焦的環境特徵。…
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傑特帕斯 on 藍橋春雪的書評服務
首先是對話,能看出很想在對話中表達出角色所有情緒,但這個做法並不實際。漫畫有畫面,動畫甚至有配音,但寫作能仰賴的只有作者主動描寫。正如在聊天軟體中傳送訊息,同一句話可能會因為沒有其他資訊,而造成誤會對方的情緒和本意。未來可以嘗試在對話的前後補充人物的表情、肢體動作、行為模式,增強整體的畫面感,進而強化讀者對角色的印象,也更能將角色當下的樣態表達完整。…
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傑特帕斯 on 藍橋春雪的書評服務
關於敘述不足的部分想補充一些。
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