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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16429Please respect copyright.PENANAGXD5ULQlcW
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 429Please respect copyright.PENANA1bFVAU509Y
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.429Please respect copyright.PENANArMAP4JpTMv
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.429Please respect copyright.PENANACRPFvH9s9T
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!429Please respect copyright.PENANAOPI41e3OEl
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!429Please respect copyright.PENANAVD6uowUgQp
Well done, Zak!
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