In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqeaBiiHKox
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2MsI7KaIkD
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvsDu9Wn2sU
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb3B5VxMx9v
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp9xT1SYDau
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!683Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaemiKcE6QH
Well done, Zak!
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