作者妳好804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIyPRJI96el
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稍微看了下这本佩姬804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuOHpSQs11N
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsrRozzF4hD
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2SxKoN6AWm
现世一堆东西804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzVOsyVR7Nf
其实就很简单一个道理804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhmaWBR89su
主角想要被爱804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKD6FsoR03D
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI7m3QivFGv
男主卢克爱804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHMrEVT3Qw9
主角就爱回去804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNvcxzlRedE
女主伊莎爱804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGPGPPsCtU6
主角就爱回去804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFZCAmbQhRB
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZaA7t8k9zS
想要被爱是佩姬的主题804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZoWGCA6kg9
主角性别不是问题804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ832L0UyqGr
内心冲突不是问题804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0VV9NVVaD0
主角被爱就迎刃而解804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdAr6la8Nto
看不懂这点整部书就看不了804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBO3H29x4q0
妳的书乏人问津是这道理804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIvaMkaSu9g
作者妳说主角口是心非804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡebfhtNH1AO
欸我说这不对804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuhPeTBBdLP
这明摆着口非心也非804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7sWpahoGwH
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpPqafvYbTR
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡviNU4kqLvb
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrmf5h4kaRk
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡREqy8zJOej
为了被爱804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmCG2cOK5rt
连原本的性别都不要了804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7hgz4r6wMK
这主角疯的傻的804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy4yVfmEX86
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9YfdwAWSPV
女主伊莎804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPBHZd7ROrP
单纯的色鬼804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4oMfmyNGPY
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWBHhiKWDVO
黑化可能
艾德兰804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDz4gAQpXXD
可怜虫阿804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy6WAqmnAyC
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5VNcUoOqor
妳说解释不够804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxodozmvVmU
我到觉得清楚804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJT4FXsMKTa
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUhY3QHSGL
他为啥强804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq8ABQPrJud
妳啥都没讲804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡabehy8PdLM
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJD2FsXza0l
也是除主角外最明白的角色804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqLvu4monN8
她就拿来爱主角的804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjsxFH2Hp4w
功能性角色
还有其他许多804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnC3niYpgnB
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAUn9ettALM
可以瞧见妳的苦心804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdfooDAzcNq
我觉得这没必要804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSmds908MQS
好的台词提一次够了804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgOmGN4QB8b
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIQUYIwR9Cw
我倒嫌设定囉嗦804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXalQNCXwJ
空白很重要804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2qVsbRlCRY
没明白有没明白的好处804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡURJU2pndZN
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡruoWcf8WGb
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡchancNCFel
我还会继续看的804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡufEtg9B7qe
确实好看804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ROoO12M5C
希望你这能写完804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkADGNJ2RMF
能放上起点不804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkAhXGpYxAA
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSeU7lG6krF
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCXIqFngIZZ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0KJc5M8xKC
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZGZGRGZMg6
感謝你的評文804Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa0GdcnxMSY
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