作者妳好504Please respect copyright.PENANAl1avLKzW9J
受到妳的邀请504Please respect copyright.PENANAn7j18cidsd
稍微看了下这本佩姬504Please respect copyright.PENANAhaZeoSs18s
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法504Please respect copyright.PENANAWSeKUDQBI3
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西504Please respect copyright.PENANAqxCfF64ehM
现世一堆东西504Please respect copyright.PENANAmR5xuAgq5S
其实就很简单一个道理504Please respect copyright.PENANArpbZ1EZj82
主角想要被爱504Please respect copyright.PENANAs36L7lRuTV
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱504Please respect copyright.PENANAjCWmqUFhla
男主卢克爱504Please respect copyright.PENANAPuxdjjGkZi
主角就爱回去504Please respect copyright.PENANAcgMgLeK0kE
女主伊莎爱504Please respect copyright.PENANAsYiXFXDLwv
主角就爱回去504Please respect copyright.PENANAaO5kTo6gJU
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理504Please respect copyright.PENANA5TH4nOIbVK
想要被爱是佩姬的主题504Please respect copyright.PENANAewKpuirocV
主角性别不是问题504Please respect copyright.PENANAYS7zrDnXyH
内心冲突不是问题504Please respect copyright.PENANAA5FsDGCuUk
主角被爱就迎刃而解504Please respect copyright.PENANAYrQEXzJ7Qg
看不懂这点整部书就看不了504Please respect copyright.PENANA2VAMoNXof6
妳的书乏人问津是这道理504Please respect copyright.PENANAMzQ4HrpVn7
作者妳说主角口是心非504Please respect copyright.PENANAfozNOUcci3
欸我说这不对504Please respect copyright.PENANAYWDxPJ2Fan
这明摆着口非心也非504Please respect copyright.PENANAAhqsx3hsFV
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰504Please respect copyright.PENANAY5oF4CPpvL
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵504Please respect copyright.PENANAeb2duDdNyd
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜504Please respect copyright.PENANAGIS3fzNv3m
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的504Please respect copyright.PENANApsYk6LTiMl
为了被爱504Please respect copyright.PENANAVN51n5fMKQ
连原本的性别都不要了504Please respect copyright.PENANAihtAOoGkm4
这主角疯的傻的504Please respect copyright.PENANAgScohZIyAr
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色504Please respect copyright.PENANALIXuEIxyYj
女主伊莎504Please respect copyright.PENANAaqNPgfrdP8
单纯的色鬼504Please respect copyright.PENANAycWcP3dOyR
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性504Please respect copyright.PENANA6awC27hNGK
黑化可能
艾德兰504Please respect copyright.PENANAzDvdJrO85f
可怜虫阿504Please respect copyright.PENANAph0EYVNzQx
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了504Please respect copyright.PENANAII56NyiUQ4
妳说解释不够504Please respect copyright.PENANApUdMMSp1hp
我到觉得清楚504Please respect copyright.PENANAuXMXspVyGP
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够504Please respect copyright.PENANA8Qag4H4xEo
他为啥强504Please respect copyright.PENANA6e9sFyIjnF
妳啥都没讲504Please respect copyright.PENANAwn4ncYynmI
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白504Please respect copyright.PENANAg7Ff5dYJia
也是除主角外最明白的角色504Please respect copyright.PENANAMiD8FffFx0
她就拿来爱主角的504Please respect copyright.PENANAvDBY6Ksa5R
功能性角色
还有其他许多504Please respect copyright.PENANAvl5GQEDkp5
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多504Please respect copyright.PENANAEVBkui9HSm
可以瞧见妳的苦心504Please respect copyright.PENANAlG8ziGTXkv
我觉得这没必要504Please respect copyright.PENANAuIWLM3j1bz
好的台词提一次够了504Please respect copyright.PENANAx4S3MXtMlU
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨504Please respect copyright.PENANAqArFv1rpyo
我倒嫌设定囉嗦504Please respect copyright.PENANAvOieJ5sxrn
空白很重要504Please respect copyright.PENANAUyVAbsiGuS
没明白有没明白的好处504Please respect copyright.PENANAaoakUHWNsS
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说504Please respect copyright.PENANAlqG3myuRQ1
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书504Please respect copyright.PENANAnjg7Ngi62x
我还会继续看的504Please respect copyright.PENANAj0CrpK208V
确实好看504Please respect copyright.PENANALLKBsxFdEc
希望你这能写完504Please respect copyright.PENANAfp82mPBG5s
能放上起点不504Please respect copyright.PENANAJYqj8QN8fv
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
504Please respect copyright.PENANAoDSR7ftFez
作者回應:504Please respect copyright.PENANAwgKmYcg9o2
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,504Please respect copyright.PENANALTclmAqA06
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,504Please respect copyright.PENANAnVZQIptfDk
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞504Please respect copyright.PENANALj1Mm83pZ6
感謝你的評文504Please respect copyright.PENANAsxJX5H120s
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