作者妳好757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAduL9WmGl4
受到妳的邀请757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡurVjOAGupB
稍微看了下这本佩姬757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpOvlkYENLX
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡni5Y40P2IO
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ4zTsCY6jp
现世一堆东西757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2qXSoGWJeZ
其实就很简单一个道理757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMGNA0xogbe
主角想要被爱757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMddgwdBnLt
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡigmGHJLpcr
男主卢克爱757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsFnoe31YHA
主角就爱回去757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh8qRNtspT2
女主伊莎爱757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMKMaet3MjM
主角就爱回去757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcB70ik1Aww
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6MlZlzM4WX
想要被爱是佩姬的主题757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkgSwZweIsf
主角性别不是问题757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF2b8d6XTsX
内心冲突不是问题757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyfzfaTu0iB
主角被爱就迎刃而解757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGgSGQzwMHm
看不懂这点整部书就看不了757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY2DC6mIQCk
妳的书乏人问津是这道理757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKvA2XMHYu4
作者妳说主角口是心非757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7qpI7zTqzD
欸我说这不对757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYBjYH0ohZA
这明摆着口非心也非757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDIKHMiGnga
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWUmFt54Xru
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOGPq6dxE0F
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwwQCgqN0ma
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzrwB6eIlWv
为了被爱757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZvx0a0Jk5Y
连原本的性别都不要了757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeaONN2aTFM
这主角疯的傻的757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrTxbQU094g
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAGOu3F0JtI
女主伊莎757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBuF0FfRtjo
单纯的色鬼757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYz2LRGXOWJ
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡouzdFjuBve
黑化可能
艾德兰757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzVA2iMCtAy
可怜虫阿757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0zNUCeFYy9
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGh4EHUKcNh
妳说解释不够757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtYfW6HrFEd
我到觉得清楚757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoH67EuBCKp
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKHHXuexpt6
他为啥强757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0xGhMCdHK0
妳啥都没讲757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyJs9H8fcsb
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzq5bFUNEf3
也是除主角外最明白的角色757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4HuMVfDafd
她就拿来爱主角的757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi67AYpT9QW
功能性角色
还有其他许多757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4szXCrnXM1
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcQmfPqlV4K
可以瞧见妳的苦心757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhRcYEY2LOB
我觉得这没必要757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1xMeRztWdT
好的台词提一次够了757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ95hCuo715r
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdp6BkNN9ML
我倒嫌设定囉嗦757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOe3gu2Suwb
空白很重要757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpJ8vS1RfXJ
没明白有没明白的好处757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF2K2kzpGb3
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmNXDGiuehP
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvkXCc6UWjx
我还会继续看的757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzNV4bKfhYf
确实好看757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNqyDwptgjH
希望你这能写完757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyzKvfjIyPc
能放上起点不757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡip17qmO9Lg
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMC2PsqjzFv
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡto9YD5L8QG
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYEj0za0v3K
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRJ46zcpuQ5
感謝你的評文757Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBbNyeROvoO
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