作者妳好768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡweoHJFHsEM
受到妳的邀请768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6dZ9CmSq09
稍微看了下这本佩姬768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCWKUdQtn0H
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhTL1pwiihL
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIZ87H4eGYO
现世一堆东西768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr57XUGuLlO
其实就很简单一个道理768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbSMFNHrxE3
主角想要被爱768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO0sWdTkUBW
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIb2I3MSRvw
男主卢克爱768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwlnXoDrKaR
主角就爱回去768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡebVOeUDJBt
女主伊莎爱768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5IjUwWMkJ
主角就爱回去768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwsRZ8T3A9W
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGb1dweoWve
想要被爱是佩姬的主题768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcDe8TNBpAq
主角性别不是问题768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl8kyUrcqAl
内心冲突不是问题768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdui5gFl953
主角被爱就迎刃而解768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUapDGnaQkd
看不懂这点整部书就看不了768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAKWmwPuQHn
妳的书乏人问津是这道理768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCDeq8W0ON6
作者妳说主角口是心非768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqvxqqQXii8
欸我说这不对768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡghlPeTZZsG
这明摆着口非心也非768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZASWG23YIz
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtnNf2uZyno
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAhmQgmMpc7
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3EWvhbd9Ou
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhTXUN0jPmh
为了被爱768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkqM0cJmGLs
连原本的性别都不要了768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyBGTmTS0xd
这主角疯的傻的768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMMKytKuz3n
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrW01ofq6j8
女主伊莎768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVHH4zpU7Gj
单纯的色鬼768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9mQPvH9aX7
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYe6twhi5yc
黑化可能
艾德兰768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe8AEqNrtqF
可怜虫阿768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡViJrZ4jymx
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIl5ZIb0vnN
妳说解释不够768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG9Z99zyfFJ
我到觉得清楚768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlWdi7Zjcd7
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKz42kxiAYu
他为啥强768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGWDtjncnRH
妳啥都没讲768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrAuC6yGKXl
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnZO1Qgp1OW
也是除主角外最明白的角色768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH6AOZQ9OPi
她就拿来爱主角的768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjr2IKgWKnS
功能性角色
还有其他许多768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5kCQ30msjZ
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ27sIME8L4J
可以瞧见妳的苦心768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpB3rIdINPh
我觉得这没必要768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOSbQhPAutp
好的台词提一次够了768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEg2dyf08Ct
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡporsqwjsSR
我倒嫌设定囉嗦768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7MQKx5KBU0
空白很重要768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiDnqBsmquN
没明白有没明白的好处768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBEVIpQKrNy
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtX8sYTB6aw
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ82nG5YlHKS
我还会继续看的768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBKriz6buYE
确实好看768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8b3W15JTA
希望你这能写完768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFdhErOiGMI
能放上起点不768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhOe1c135va
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVke7oj1or0
作者回應：768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj1HGvBt7Ik
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5WL04xqAql
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5HY1K6Fo1w
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2l0TAcHgpv
感謝你的評文768Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkbQWPRI0RM
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