作者妳好819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUyNrwXAoYG
受到妳的邀请819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg0XdWF7kcZ
稍微看了下这本佩姬819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnGVV6ddIlz
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyF60RHgnMv
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDOgu89JPlk
现世一堆东西819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNkVZ7zmlHn
其实就很简单一个道理819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2JvjsWkfXv
主角想要被爱819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLSryovuw0K
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi2Z0chBgkQ
男主卢克爱819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2kdBH0nggP
主角就爱回去819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEEnXi6DzA4
女主伊莎爱819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ03CIHibJt8
主角就爱回去819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIOluVQb9yZ
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHK0aRquw9Z
想要被爱是佩姬的主题819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7oZmp7LpwD
主角性别不是问题819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxGCVH0JzzL
内心冲突不是问题819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡogOt5wvomk
主角被爱就迎刃而解819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxOdJUF6nz8
看不懂这点整部书就看不了819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYGcRnwafsj
妳的书乏人问津是这道理819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ51MSmSSd4D
作者妳说主角口是心非819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTdvdb3Non
欸我说这不对819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvdsKe3mpLp
这明摆着口非心也非819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrX4QL1JSQ9
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfdLXyKykXa
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKjpROWPeuf
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBoyGO5xHei
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡirTqIyvY3I
为了被爱819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUNfqxcRpJu
连原本的性别都不要了819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZsLjm9wdDZ
这主角疯的傻的819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyRuxKEDrlc
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx0EpXDlflJ
女主伊莎819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbG3J593YW1
单纯的色鬼819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNdOK7biqO2
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLw89MWg0Bk
黑化可能
艾德兰819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdFgsI7wBan
可怜虫阿819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpvzU7kCV3A
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSO0nSPsV5e
妳说解释不够819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUC4wXvlhV
我到觉得清楚819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu5f8k2SSKh
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA4oLNBUPEA
他为啥强819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQFPyJLS2XY
妳啥都没讲819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1uOofO9pQm
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrQDx0UcaOH
也是除主角外最明白的角色819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs3I9VOvx0O
她就拿来爱主角的819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIfCe1IrcwP
功能性角色
还有其他许多819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1EPv1LVMes
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnlZG34M1hL
可以瞧见妳的苦心819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTHCTg9gvXX
我觉得这没必要819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtvEwAGIiVw
好的台词提一次够了819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAr0yYFpak9
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrooHTtgoD9
我倒嫌设定囉嗦819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSMXqcbsR9i
空白很重要819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGxCfPvCOq
没明白有没明白的好处819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzl3up2wPiF
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡklJgAyvMAf
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXznoBHpxXi
我还会继续看的819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2VykAeiM17
确实好看819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiG7eiEVjQq
希望你这能写完819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCvAcyLiRXT
能放上起点不819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ84mR5Ee8o8
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0p3KtGGG6M
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFCSAKkmoqQ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx1IFQGQj3b
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6MC3HXeQwF
感謝你的評文819Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQCMqOvKT8G
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