作者妳好476Please respect copyright.PENANAbU2RWNMyME
受到妳的邀请476Please respect copyright.PENANA86umQhnqvj
稍微看了下这本佩姬476Please respect copyright.PENANANgzGQp9K93
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法476Please respect copyright.PENANA99m3BxkLNW
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西476Please respect copyright.PENANA2n7ucrIJ63
现世一堆东西476Please respect copyright.PENANAju3tVxZLPO
其实就很简单一个道理476Please respect copyright.PENANARHbz4MJsTm
主角想要被爱476Please respect copyright.PENANAwU3zscR7Ve
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱476Please respect copyright.PENANANwhpvuOTx5
男主卢克爱476Please respect copyright.PENANA6koPkSd1aO
主角就爱回去476Please respect copyright.PENANAmKEAdHQ0ie
女主伊莎爱476Please respect copyright.PENANAG3AyAdMitj
主角就爱回去476Please respect copyright.PENANAsVs4Ldac1x
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理476Please respect copyright.PENANA5CqHLbbPko
想要被爱是佩姬的主题476Please respect copyright.PENANAOVwIxi4mlM
主角性别不是问题476Please respect copyright.PENANALfjbawPVIO
内心冲突不是问题476Please respect copyright.PENANAA3tzihKNHy
主角被爱就迎刃而解476Please respect copyright.PENANA9EP8UKWxKn
看不懂这点整部书就看不了476Please respect copyright.PENANAXlfO0VTCtX
妳的书乏人问津是这道理476Please respect copyright.PENANAFZrd8TOI2y
作者妳说主角口是心非476Please respect copyright.PENANAbjBbXDP9Vd
欸我说这不对476Please respect copyright.PENANAZGSD1Cu54T
这明摆着口非心也非476Please respect copyright.PENANAl39Vyo2btD
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰476Please respect copyright.PENANAz3xLBITEGb
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵476Please respect copyright.PENANAnciqz9Y0HL
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜476Please respect copyright.PENANAau5xMuh8yf
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的476Please respect copyright.PENANA4FMcWHhjQe
为了被爱476Please respect copyright.PENANAsqb6YYExRx
连原本的性别都不要了476Please respect copyright.PENANAKF9bvgrO12
这主角疯的傻的476Please respect copyright.PENANAY0KQYkY8B9
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色476Please respect copyright.PENANA3YVJ5KP1cy
女主伊莎476Please respect copyright.PENANA6u2Iv0kqif
单纯的色鬼476Please respect copyright.PENANAeEqKYNiKnf
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性476Please respect copyright.PENANAowCmTZEYCP
黑化可能
艾德兰476Please respect copyright.PENANA8lKsvrwOOi
可怜虫阿476Please respect copyright.PENANASgGFG5rj3p
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了476Please respect copyright.PENANAZZtR8bOeu9
妳说解释不够476Please respect copyright.PENANARFZlrrI0Hg
我到觉得清楚476Please respect copyright.PENANAfaOKrG7tuQ
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够476Please respect copyright.PENANAKsbUpFtzJ7
他为啥强476Please respect copyright.PENANAxW6kvvDhJu
妳啥都没讲476Please respect copyright.PENANAogHqgf9Nyj
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白476Please respect copyright.PENANAoDX9L4T1eB
也是除主角外最明白的角色476Please respect copyright.PENANA0nUfyaeGDw
她就拿来爱主角的476Please respect copyright.PENANAVtG1lCPUlF
功能性角色
还有其他许多476Please respect copyright.PENANAnko0IqtdaP
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多476Please respect copyright.PENANATWCbaNS37w
可以瞧见妳的苦心476Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1Y57cQCez
我觉得这没必要476Please respect copyright.PENANAhCbVGvJNak
好的台词提一次够了476Please respect copyright.PENANAzrtFW9UIc4
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨476Please respect copyright.PENANAZD5IQIJd0n
我倒嫌设定囉嗦476Please respect copyright.PENANAUYkAQZZ8iG
空白很重要476Please respect copyright.PENANAU9wkQpcrpv
没明白有没明白的好处476Please respect copyright.PENANAOwlTvJep8a
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说476Please respect copyright.PENANASIzThIct37
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书476Please respect copyright.PENANAu1lE2Dnpg2
我还会继续看的476Please respect copyright.PENANAF0FDA90pDU
确实好看476Please respect copyright.PENANAwfRY6QcEEX
希望你这能写完476Please respect copyright.PENANAjUOEDm2Qpx
能放上起点不476Please respect copyright.PENANAMiRAsXTlpJ
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
476Please respect copyright.PENANA3Lp1vLNrR1
作者回應:476Please respect copyright.PENANA8NyRVpkv1i
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,476Please respect copyright.PENANAnXSzyWPljF
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,476Please respect copyright.PENANA5wICgWEk3T
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞476Please respect copyright.PENANAkcVW62iCmI
感謝你的評文476Please respect copyright.PENANAOcBIetOJoK
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