寫作菜鳥日記 -12813Please respect copyright.PENANAubALW8p9h3
今天把第14章寫到五千字13Please respect copyright.PENANA4oOPT6XJ9X
邊寫邊發現大綱要改,13Please respect copyright.PENANA61fwdKHB0H
然後好幾次都被自己的設定不夠周全給卡住,13Please respect copyright.PENANAMBl8RfzXfh
或是糾結在一些不是很重要的問題,13Please respect copyright.PENANAZ6nFWnOVoz
舉個例子,比如常見的日本影片,13Please respect copyright.PENANAz4NOvOJjn2
怪都只攻擊東京,13Please respect copyright.PENANABR6lx97k6k
主角可以直接迎戰。13Please respect copyright.PENANAVGY08hfLwP
就不會攻擊例如名古屋還是秋田13Please respect copyright.PENANA7d7KFF5x2l
(主角坐火車兩個小時後抵達,城市已夷為平地)13Please respect copyright.PENANAzERDqeYRy7
其實好像可以不用管這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAYuVTzCtgx3
但我太容易被這種奇怪問題影響,13Please respect copyright.PENANA4qw0sXgE8L
一旦陷入焦躁就無法寫下去。13Please respect copyright.PENANAhqAHkFz9fO
最後還是花了點篇幅來解釋這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAAq13ksUhOR
並且因此修改了大綱。13Please respect copyright.PENANACV2gLdLiEd
另外一件事,前面的日常生活化描寫,13Please respect copyright.PENANALP5IpHdCwS
雖然很有趣,13Please respect copyright.PENANAeHyjyN33Pw
但貼近現實角度的喜劇的調性有點走過頭了,13Please respect copyright.PENANAj1LTopa2Q5
只好再花一點篇幅拉回一些神話奇幻的調性,13Please respect copyright.PENANAT6FIUokAgC
這章剩下的篇幅,13Please respect copyright.PENANA887Ysd7a7B
應該是要寫那對已分手的情侶的後續,13Please respect copyright.PENANAV68tIMqwjH
這可能要想一想,不想寫得太哀傷。13Please respect copyright.PENANAXYNHgxqWSd
應該有更好的表現方式才對,13Please respect copyright.PENANAvGCSYxykQV
把問題帶進夢裡吧,13Please respect copyright.PENANA0HSCArwioC
夢會給我答案的。