寫作菜鳥日記 -1265Please respect copyright.PENANABlBws0o67z
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。5Please respect copyright.PENANA0hi6raYRQy
字數 8,2875Please respect copyright.PENANABpM5wQhzsp
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,5Please respect copyright.PENANAkN0NY1PqOi
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。5Please respect copyright.PENANAcstTFSYMMl
跟流水帳差不多(汗)5Please respect copyright.PENANA4b9V3eFVqQ
卻沒有可以修改的方向。5Please respect copyright.PENANAPwDZNEDAJ2
問題應該出在節奏的安排,5Please respect copyright.PENANA6jyVaiXAYT
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,5Please respect copyright.PENANA11fJ8Jy77f
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,5Please respect copyright.PENANA69UbSq6mvC
到章末堆到最高點。5Please respect copyright.PENANAzTDaDVB40o
但是這一章一直平平的,5Please respect copyright.PENANA0lAVfMDe6z
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點5Please respect copyright.PENANAXw3zjKnYes
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。5Please respect copyright.PENANAJeMXqF4uv9
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,5Please respect copyright.PENANANnLbMJBi2y
接著寫下一章。5Please respect copyright.PENANAWnHCaIZtBy
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡5Please respect copyright.PENANASM4Yq4N38n
沒什麼思考能力。5Please respect copyright.PENANAR8sHc4RyIf
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。5Please respect copyright.PENANAwYMtdxjIEo
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。