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SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”

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Apr 18, 2025 120 3 分鐘
No Plagiarism!eTv7fCXpKF4eHmuBY8Zpposted on PＥNAＮＡ

INT. ABANDONED VISION TECH OUTPOST – LOWER LEVELS – NIGHT124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrqNP3EuvWE
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡflrVecTnvL
[Jason follows the noise. The sound grows clearer: the metallic scrape of something being dragged… and faint, stuttering breathing. The tunnel slopes downward now, leading to a heavy, half-open blast door labeled in worn-out letters:124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNfVhIn0MDC
V.T. ARCHIVE ACCESS 12 – RESTRICTED124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOTaheSaXxc
Beneath it, the Vision Tech logo barely clings to the rusted metal—a fractured eye surrounded by circuitry.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnZXBdJ24C3
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJMclFk7uQG
[Jason ducks under the warped door, stepping into a wide room filled with decay and memory.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaTkqSFizjc
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPvlGf1FwYz
[Old fluorescent panels flicker, barely alive. On every wall: Vision Tech propaganda posters, yellowed and stained.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqUrt4A1eal
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHtzdtfQEdk
[POSTER 1]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYJCr0u4gsc
“THE FUTURE IS MANAGED – TRUST THE VISION”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwGMP4Tj5wO
(A smiling human child hugging a mug… yeah. A mug.)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVajDiTMgm7
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDbEgJpKvia
[POSTER 2]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX25cptN4Pp
“YOUR SECURITY IS OUR PRIORITY – V.T. GUARDIAN UNITS STANDBY 24/7”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz15AFNNAfG
(Art of a prototype Security bot giving a thumbs-up with a human in the background nervously holding pepper spray.)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiUeTELjB1Z
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2y1cBbUVhu
[POSTER 3]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiVG3VEasXW
“REPLACEABLE PARTS, IRREPLACEABLE LOYALTY – JOIN THE LABOR FAMILY TODAY”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSQ2EG4M5d2
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKEZ6SdfAxD
[Jason’s gaze scans over it all, barely hiding his disgust.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHjEMgVfdzZ
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIYGQfpTWZQ
JASON124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkn5faK6IhT
(mutters)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmGWzdu4eQ3
“Replaceable parts, huh? Guess they meant it.”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ15E33mwzd
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNmxc1fvMah
[His flashlight beam pans right—and stops.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9w7OMmGXls
On a pile of robotic corpses. Security, Labor… even a few Operator units. All torn apart, limbs stripped, cores hollowed out. But something’s wrong—not all the damage looks like it was done by Purification bots. Some of the wounds are… surgical. Clean. Too clean.124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2yGpd64bhr
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfPvivK9gAy
[He steps closer to one body—a Labor bot with an open chest cavity. No signs of a fight. Just… opened. Emptied.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcH6nHhceR9
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM7VNb2pkNO
[Suddenly—movement.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR2LWs12nDi
A twitch. One of the bodies at the far end jerks. Then another. Not rising. Not hostile. Just twitching—random, pitiful spasms like muscles trying to remember how to move.124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlMa4kn2uqK
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡELimFPNdCF
[Jason readies his railcannon, stepping slowly through the room.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF2GFW3K2gc
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoCfVxLI6jA
JASON (V.O.)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPQgcvC7XRk
“Whatever happened down here… Vision Tech wanted it buried. Makes you wonder what else they buried before the Liberation.”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn9640DL96P
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnWUbCSuYk1
[He kneels beside a half-buried terminal, brushes off dust and dried oil, and flicks the power node. The screen blinks to life, stuttering, flickering. A logo loads—Vision Tech’s signature boot-up chime plays, warped and slowed like a dying lullaby.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTsHnhlujg
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfLbWeWOq49
[Text appears:124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIlcjt933rG
WELCOME BACK, ADMIN.124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiYWdeO1vFM
LAST ACCESS: 2,191 DAYS AGO.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvFwaYcOOH
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx5X7WvxNNz
[Before Jason can dig further, he hears it again—dragging. Closer this time. Coming from a side corridor leading out of the archive.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡirE49Aw7Y3
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLx5grxSBHR
[He lifts his weapon.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlEqqQRJJuW
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUTlgZ6zERN
JASON124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjDq3KVLscF
(to himself)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAl9CawWgmk
“Alright, mystery freak number two… come out slow and don’t ooze.”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUga6dNB9S
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTOzoSLIrGU
[The dragging stops. Silence. Jason steps toward the corridor—then a shape lurches into the light.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡujt2FE0Bwy
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmGJWnXC36
[It’s another Labor bot—but barely. Its head is crushed, one leg gone, dragging itself with twisted arms. But the real horror is what’s inside it—black tendrils pushing out from the joints, trying to control the body like a puppet. The host is long dead. The driver? Still trying.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6L0StSwgR8
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpk7Nw1bbkd
[Jason doesn’t hesitate—BLAM—a clean rail shot through the chest, pinning the bot to the wall. Sparks explode. The tendrils convulse and burn.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1TcLJqle4K
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKwnbqygm1H
[Jason exhales, slowly lowering his weapon.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpXc9UzXU8d
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWBW32T1uyY
JASON (V.O.)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRlGBfS0lXX
“These things… they don’t just kill. They move in. They take over.”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyAgvJqHWTI
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEkVpuOM7eM
[He looks back to the archive room. Back to the posters. Back to the old world that promised safety and loyalty.]124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU4n02mXwqv
124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbxD9VbfSID
JASON124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQYWiXWbBk6
(dryly)124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6wRZLx5ClW
“Nice job, Vision Tech.”124Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Sghqc7uXB

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#1 Welcome to Central City
#2 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt1
#3 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt2
#4 SCENE 2 – “Quiet Doesn’t Last”
#5 SCENE 3 – “Unwelcome Footprints”
#6 SCENE 4 – “Break the Silence”
#7 SCENE 5 – “The Parts We Don’t Talk About”
#8 SCENE 6 – “Still Breathing”
#9 SCENE 7 – “The Smiling Knife”
#10 SCENE 8 – “Ghost in the Pipes”
#11 SCENE 9 – “Right-Hand Problems”
#12 SCENE 10 – “Drag Marks and Doubt”
#13 SCENE 11 – “Below the Skin of the City”
#14 SCENE 12 – “What Shouldn’t Be There”
#15 SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”
#16 SCENE 14 – “Fragments of a Dying Empire”
#17 SCENE 15 – “Shadows Don’t Bargain”
#18 SCENE 16 – “Rust Between Circuits”
#19 SCENE 17 – “The Breach”
#20 SCENE 18 – “Three Bots & a Parasite”
#21 SCENE 19 – “Paperwork and Parasites”
#22 SCENE 20 – “Smuggle Me Softly”
#23 SCENE 21 – “Oil, Info, and Idiots”
#24 SCENE 21 – EXTENDED: “Sleepover Protocols & Other Malfunctions”
#25 SCENE 22 – “Robot Makeover: Low Budget Edition”
#26 SCENE 23 – “Caffeine, Cloaks, and Casual Paranoia”
#27 SCENE 24 – “Rustfields”
#28 SCENE 25 – “Buzz and Circuits”
#29 SCENE 26 – “Tune-Ups and Tightropes”
#30 SCENE 27 – “Errands and Egos”
#31 SCENE 28 – “Groceries and Good Lies”
#32 SCENE 29 – “Dinner and Disclosures”
#33 SCENE 30 – “Steam, Suffering, and Swords”
#34 SCENE 31 – “Dicey Decisions”
#35 SCENE 32 – “Good Night, You Weirdos”
#36 SCENE 33 – “Dreamscapes”
#37 SCENE 34 – “Office and Off-Duty”
#38 SCENE 35 – “A Pleasant Stroll… with Minor Homicidal Undertones”
#39 SCENE 36 – “Wings and Wires”
#40 SCENE 37 – “After-Hours”
#41 SCENE 38 – “Alcohol & Stuff”
#42 SCENE 39 – “Shutdown.exe”
#43 SCENE 40 – “The Weight of Peace”
#44 SCENE 41 – “Midnight, Glitches, and Blankets”
#45 SCENE 42 – “Dawn of the Mildly Functional”
#46 SCENE 43 – “Commute to Doom”
#47 SCENE 44 – “An Office Full of Violence and Vending Machines”
#48 SCENE 45 – “Lunch Break and Clickbait Nightmares”
#49 SCENE 46 – “Rise and Resist (Routine)”
#50 SCENE 47 – “Unauthorized Research”
#51 SCENE 48 – “Wardrobe Upgrades”
#52 SCENE 49 – “Field‑Trip From Hell”
#53 SCENE 50 – “Afternoon Idleness”
#54 SCENE 51 – “Uno and Other Emergencies”
#55 SCENE 52 – “Tech on a Budget”
#56 SCENE 53 – “Delivery, Disobedience & Discoveries”
#57 SCENE 54 – “Questions & Quirks”
#58 SCENE 55 – “Privacy Settings”
#59 SCENE 56 – “Entertainment Planning”
#60 SCENE 57 – "Loyalty Reinforcement Seminar"
#61 SCENE 58 – “Friday‑Night Free Play”
#62 SCENE 59 – “Spire of Panic”
#63 SCENE 60 – “Lines, Orders, and Vines”
#64 SCENE 61 – “Infiltration”
#65 SCENE 62 – “Regroup & Re‑Arm”
#66 SCENE 63 – “Through Flesh and Steel”
#67 SCENE 64 – “Descent Protocol”
#68 SCENE 65 – “The Lungs Below”
#69 SCENE 66 – “Dead Air”
#70 SCENE 67 – “The Heart of the Hollow”
#71 SCENE 68 – “Overheat Protocol”
#72 SCENE 69 – “Sanitized and Sampled”
#73 SCENE 70 – “Totally Normal Roommates”
#74 SCENE 71 – "The Long Walk to Judgment"
#75 SCENE 72 – "Welcome Home, Idiot"
#76 SCENE 73 – "A Promise, A Vacation"
#77 SCENE 74 – "Field Trip to Food"
#78 SCENE 75 – "Cabin Fever"
#79 SCENE 76 – "Manners, Please"
#80 SCENE 77 – "Errands with Extra Steps"
#81 SCENE 78 – "Books, Pills, and Poor Decisions"
#82 SCENE 79 – "Pharmacy Phantoms"
#83 SCENE 80 – "Digital Birds and Binary Bees"
#84 SCENE 81 – "Babysitting? Seriously?"
#85 SCENE 82 – "The Babysitting Begins"
#86 SCENE 83 – "Chaos, Baby-Sized"
#87 SCENE 84 – "Midnight Meltdown"
#88 SCENE 85 – "The Dreams They Dreamed"
#89 SCENE 86 – "The Morning After"
#90 SCENE 87 – "Return of the Parents"
#91 SCENE 88 – "The Reveal"
#92 SCENE 89 – "System Error: Josh.exe Has Stopped Responding"
#93 SCENE 90 – "A Totally Normal Lunch"
#94 SCENE 91 – “Business As Usual”
#95 SCENE 92 – “After the Storm”
#96 SCENE 93 – “The Rim of Opinions”
#97 SCENE 94 – “Tales, Tails, and Talking at 2AM”
#98 SCENE 95 – “Surgery, Solo”
#99 SCENE 96 – “Sleepless Core”
#100 SCENE 97 – “Unknown Systems”
#101 SCENE 98 – “Orders and Oil”
#102 SCENE 99 – “Key Moments”
#103 SCENE 100 – “Three Days of Sky”
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