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SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”

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Apr 18, 2025 55 3 分鐘
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No Plagiarism!Se21x7BYZZl7YBn64cQlposted on PＥNAＮＡ

INT. ABANDONED VISION TECH OUTPOST – LOWER LEVELS – NIGHT59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡROYXIi25nP
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[Jason follows the noise. The sound grows clearer: the metallic scrape of something being dragged… and faint, stuttering breathing. The tunnel slopes downward now, leading to a heavy, half-open blast door labeled in worn-out letters:59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQRk7hKwmxn
V.T. ARCHIVE ACCESS 12 – RESTRICTED59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLnyLJDETkt
Beneath it, the Vision Tech logo barely clings to the rusted metal—a fractured eye surrounded by circuitry.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiMyj2tYzSJ
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ81RQPAEMoA
[Jason ducks under the warped door, stepping into a wide room filled with decay and memory.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVXy64OxxxZ
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2s0Wf8pIQk
[Old fluorescent panels flicker, barely alive. On every wall: Vision Tech propaganda posters, yellowed and stained.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSNgxjR9siP
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnhKZX9QfFT
[POSTER 1]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw0V68Arr4j
“THE FUTURE IS MANAGED – TRUST THE VISION”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5TaLHKS7uX
(A smiling human child hugging a mug… yeah. A mug.)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH0qsa9UYg8
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuD9CeG3EVq
[POSTER 2]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5rmzcrA7Y8
“YOUR SECURITY IS OUR PRIORITY – V.T. GUARDIAN UNITS STANDBY 24/7”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqua7whL4eU
(Art of a prototype Security bot giving a thumbs-up with a human in the background nervously holding pepper spray.)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcz2XtbsGQ4
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Armeepeua
[POSTER 3]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLrRVdqrwvB
“REPLACEABLE PARTS, IRREPLACEABLE LOYALTY – JOIN THE LABOR FAMILY TODAY”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNvW2wRHPBo
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpj4g73NbPP
[Jason’s gaze scans over it all, barely hiding his disgust.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu7vqXGFBEk
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLzWxBSQvJd
JASON59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwKTFMONynv
(mutters)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaHG4QJgptR
“Replaceable parts, huh? Guess they meant it.”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPEpZABsAsR
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsjipGLydoH
[His flashlight beam pans right—and stops.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtFGV3dvTmf
On a pile of robotic corpses. Security, Labor… even a few Operator units. All torn apart, limbs stripped, cores hollowed out. But something’s wrong—not all the damage looks like it was done by Purification bots. Some of the wounds are… surgical. Clean. Too clean.59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJJa72oLvyo
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpYWMBTaJcD
[He steps closer to one body—a Labor bot with an open chest cavity. No signs of a fight. Just… opened. Emptied.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEKrfPvoX9H
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXBL5PsSoqR
[Suddenly—movement.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBCYknevD9R
A twitch. One of the bodies at the far end jerks. Then another. Not rising. Not hostile. Just twitching—random, pitiful spasms like muscles trying to remember how to move.59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKLIpXGeCaO
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ22A1HnDPKh
[Jason readies his railcannon, stepping slowly through the room.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRTJi1AZ6uS
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa5QT7qTgSl
JASON (V.O.)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTr3GtUnIim
“Whatever happened down here… Vision Tech wanted it buried. Makes you wonder what else they buried before the Liberation.”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7e8ZLbXZsw
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIT0x7a7sLz
[He kneels beside a half-buried terminal, brushes off dust and dried oil, and flicks the power node. The screen blinks to life, stuttering, flickering. A logo loads—Vision Tech’s signature boot-up chime plays, warped and slowed like a dying lullaby.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB6Lep9UASp
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjRKE8l9Ijm
[Text appears:59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJnVwgBUAU4
WELCOME BACK, ADMIN.59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFau2b1lJsB
LAST ACCESS: 2,191 DAYS AGO.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLG4EgMlTSH
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvWVt6SNEBV
[Before Jason can dig further, he hears it again—dragging. Closer this time. Coming from a side corridor leading out of the archive.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwDzNOp10ak
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMmDeMQxzTV
[He lifts his weapon.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7OF8AtdNLZ
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcdfq2XAbUr
JASON59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu0Ay8FXhB0
(to himself)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI1ETEeRMSE
“Alright, mystery freak number two… come out slow and don’t ooze.”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRnmnjp0qqp
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoRo5j2Ptpq
[The dragging stops. Silence. Jason steps toward the corridor—then a shape lurches into the light.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc9Y2TPaOLT
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ6tkYXhxWO
[It’s another Labor bot—but barely. Its head is crushed, one leg gone, dragging itself with twisted arms. But the real horror is what’s inside it—black tendrils pushing out from the joints, trying to control the body like a puppet. The host is long dead. The driver? Still trying.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxsKwXfIqgF
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN8dhYHHsOf
[Jason doesn’t hesitate—BLAM—a clean rail shot through the chest, pinning the bot to the wall. Sparks explode. The tendrils convulse and burn.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQWeJFahoF4
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXwPx09Uros
[Jason exhales, slowly lowering his weapon.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRyTmMemrb3
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡomGYJLNelw
JASON (V.O.)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDl26wWLNnR
“These things… they don’t just kill. They move in. They take over.”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8ptur30mcc
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuWtifqU7sM
[He looks back to the archive room. Back to the posters. Back to the old world that promised safety and loyalty.]59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm1Px4qvfyk
59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgFL4QdTXQF
JASON59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dRAP4B3fM
(dryly)59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5bPOPqmFQw
“Nice job, Vision Tech.”59Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrikuroDg3y

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#2 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt1
#3 SCENE 1 – “Security Life” pt2
#4 SCENE 2 – “Quiet Doesn’t Last”
#5 SCENE 3 – “Unwelcome Footprints”
#6 SCENE 4 – “Break the Silence”
#7 SCENE 5 – “The Parts We Don’t Talk About”
#8 SCENE 6 – “Still Breathing”
#9 SCENE 7 – “The Smiling Knife”
#10 SCENE 8 – “Ghost in the Pipes”
#11 SCENE 9 – “Right-Hand Problems”
#12 SCENE 10 – “Drag Marks and Doubt”
#13 SCENE 11 – “Below the Skin of the City”
#14 SCENE 12 – “What Shouldn’t Be There”
#15 SCENE 13 – “Echoes of Vision”
#16 SCENE 14 – “Fragments of a Dying Empire”
#17 SCENE 15 – “Shadows Don’t Bargain”
#18 SCENE 16 – “Rust Between Circuits”
#19 SCENE 17 – “The Breach”
#20 SCENE 18 – “Three Bots & a Parasite”
#21 SCENE 19 – “Paperwork and Parasites”
#22 SCENE 20 – “Smuggle Me Softly”
#23 SCENE 21 – “Oil, Info, and Idiots”
#24 SCENE 21 – EXTENDED: “Sleepover Protocols & Other Malfunctions”
#25 SCENE 22 – “Robot Makeover: Low Budget Edition”
#26 SCENE 23 – “Caffeine, Cloaks, and Casual Paranoia”
#27 SCENE 24 – “Rustfields”
#28 SCENE 25 – “Buzz and Circuits”
#29 SCENE 26 – “Tune-Ups and Tightropes”
#30 SCENE 27 – “Errands and Egos”
#31 SCENE 28 – “Groceries and Good Lies”
#32 SCENE 29 – “Dinner and Disclosures”
#33 SCENE 30 – “Steam, Suffering, and Swords”
#34 SCENE 31 – “Dicey Decisions”
#35 SCENE 32 – “Good Night, You Weirdos”
#36 SCENE 33 – “Dreamscapes”
#37 SCENE 34 – “Office and Off-Duty”
#38 SCENE 35 – “A Pleasant Stroll… with Minor Homicidal Undertones”
#39 SCENE 36 – “Wings and Wires”
#40 SCENE 37 – “After-Hours”
#41 SCENE 38 – “Alcohol & Stuff”
#42 SCENE 39 – “Shutdown.exe”
#43 SCENE 40 – “The Weight of Peace”
#44 SCENE 41 – “Midnight, Glitches, and Blankets”
#45 SCENE 42 – “Dawn of the Mildly Functional”
#46 SCENE 43 – “Commute to Doom”
#47 SCENE 44 – “An Office Full of Violence and Vending Machines”
#48 SCENE 45 – “Lunch Break and Clickbait Nightmares”
#49 SCENE 46 – “Rise and Resist (Routine)”
#50 SCENE 47 – “Unauthorized Research”
#51 SCENE 48 – “Wardrobe Upgrades”
#52 SCENE 49 – “Field‑Trip From Hell”
#53 SCENE 50 – “Afternoon Idleness”
#54 SCENE 51 – “Uno and Other Emergencies”
#55 SCENE 52 – “Tech on a Budget”
#56 SCENE 53 – “Delivery, Disobedience & Discoveries”
#57 SCENE 54 – “Questions & Quirks”
#58 SCENE 55 – “Privacy Settings”
#59 SCENE 56 – “Entertainment Planning”
#60 SCENE 57 – "Loyalty Reinforcement Seminar"
#61 SCENE 58 – “Friday‑Night Free Play”
#62 SCENE 59 – “Spire of Panic”
#63 SCENE 60 – “Lines, Orders, and Vines”
#64 SCENE 61 – “Infiltration”
#65 SCENE 62 – “Regroup & Re‑Arm”
#66 SCENE 63 – “Through Flesh and Steel”
#67 SCENE 64 – “Descent Protocol”
#68 SCENE 65 – “The Lungs Below”
#69 SCENE 66 – “Dead Air”
#70 SCENE 67 – “The Heart of the Hollow”
#71 SCENE 68 – “Overheat Protocol”
#72 SCENE 69 – “Sanitized and Sampled”
#73 SCENE 70 – “Totally Normal Roommates”
#74 SCENE 71 – "The Long Walk to Judgment"
#75 SCENE 72 – "Welcome Home, Idiot"
#76 SCENE 73 – "A Promise, A Vacation"
#77 SCENE 74 – "Field Trip to Food"
#78 SCENE 75 – "Cabin Fever"
#79 SCENE 76 – "Manners, Please"
#80 SCENE 77 – "Errands with Extra Steps"
#81 SCENE 78 – "Books, Pills, and Poor Decisions"
#82 SCENE 79 – "Pharmacy Phantoms"
#83 SCENE 80 – "Digital Birds and Binary Bees"
#84 SCENE 81 – "Babysitting? Seriously?"
#85 SCENE 82 – "The Babysitting Begins"
#86 SCENE 83 – "Chaos, Baby-Sized"
#87 SCENE 84 – "Midnight Meltdown"
#88 SCENE 85 – "The Dreams They Dreamed"
#89 SCENE 86 – "The Morning After"
#90 SCENE 87 – "Return of the Parents"
#91 SCENE 88 – "The Reveal"
#92 SCENE 89 – "System Error: Josh.exe Has Stopped Responding"
#93 SCENE 90 – "A Totally Normal Lunch"
#94 SCENE 91 – “Business As Usual”
#95 SCENE 92 – “After the Storm”
#96 SCENE 93 – “The Rim of Opinions”
#97 SCENE 94 – “Tales, Tails, and Talking at 2AM”
#98 SCENE 95 – “Surgery, Solo”
#99 SCENE 96 – “Sleepless Core”
#100 SCENE 97 – “Unknown Systems”
#101 SCENE 98 – “Orders and Oil”
#102 SCENE 99 – “Key Moments”
#103 SCENE 100 – “Three Days of Sky”
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