
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』324Please respect copyright.PENANAvXjE6Qr8st
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:324Please respect copyright.PENANAQ8H3whYYfV
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐324Please respect copyright.PENANAhgxeIhOslJ
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆324Please respect copyright.PENANAJAfSfHGwlG
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲324Please respect copyright.PENANATSn3QzXU7m
帶出角色支線324Please respect copyright.PENANAMDiCtOUwZm
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破324Please respect copyright.PENANA7lD7U865Fv
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫324Please respect copyright.PENANAmHJZEKpCvA
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴324Please respect copyright.PENANAGcYFQwqVev
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌324Please respect copyright.PENANAHMRQtEt9UJ
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊324Please respect copyright.PENANA1WYfggyGO0
殺人犯vs富婆324Please respect copyright.PENANAA8ANw5FagI
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌324Please respect copyright.PENANAd6R1KwYnNj
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴324Please respect copyright.PENANAmQjlDaDNv9
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕324Please respect copyright.PENANAMDjYHC7Skp
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。324Please respect copyright.PENANABwJ0gRmRYM
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。324Please respect copyright.PENANARXKkx8DT4O
魂之詩324Please respect copyright.PENANAKqjUqirZRa
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