
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』287Please respect copyright.PENANAqLCNqHj8kX
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:287Please respect copyright.PENANA2KzAjD826Y
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐287Please respect copyright.PENANAfCQChJg7qa
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆287Please respect copyright.PENANAmOgGACDtI9
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲287Please respect copyright.PENANAJaGzNxsHcb
帶出角色支線287Please respect copyright.PENANA9daQ6t9O7d
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破287Please respect copyright.PENANAMprDoAxfVn
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫287Please respect copyright.PENANAM8grMxsoAr
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴287Please respect copyright.PENANADMZO2lSwpz
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌287Please respect copyright.PENANAXsE9T1NIXe
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊287Please respect copyright.PENANAiGHpW0ZuNN
殺人犯vs富婆287Please respect copyright.PENANA6nERp7DdYN
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌287Please respect copyright.PENANAlzvlAeR6D6
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴287Please respect copyright.PENANA3wgl0bFAs6
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕287Please respect copyright.PENANABxLRFOdTzG
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。287Please respect copyright.PENANAiIZ7lB41qf
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。287Please respect copyright.PENANAbjptuRkwBY
魂之詩287Please respect copyright.PENANAsf9fpKDet9
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