
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』342Please respect copyright.PENANAeaLAkcKRlG
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:342Please respect copyright.PENANAYuqu69n674
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐342Please respect copyright.PENANAyV3tX62GEP
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆342Please respect copyright.PENANAY38No1uw87
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲342Please respect copyright.PENANAWBsf0xIGC8
帶出角色支線342Please respect copyright.PENANAcHJ50rfcry
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破342Please respect copyright.PENANAyXxOOTIxqW
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫342Please respect copyright.PENANA7Ew7LkCqO2
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴342Please respect copyright.PENANAJywlPPJlfw
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌342Please respect copyright.PENANAqxPzsjAkfn
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊342Please respect copyright.PENANAUHdm8XKt1W
殺人犯vs富婆342Please respect copyright.PENANANNQkb4Jaev
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌342Please respect copyright.PENANANJ9TJhdeJC
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴342Please respect copyright.PENANAV75fsI1mpV
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕342Please respect copyright.PENANAfFv2KOJ7ZH
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。342Please respect copyright.PENANArY1zyOcX3h
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。342Please respect copyright.PENANAZM9zbRTZB2
魂之詩342Please respect copyright.PENANARNqkqTvXl5
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