昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』140Please respect copyright.PENANA79ZrJSL4qh
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:140Please respect copyright.PENANAj4swni6h2i
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐140Please respect copyright.PENANAqyFhkFLG1p
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆140Please respect copyright.PENANAnBIM551HGz
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲140Please respect copyright.PENANAzG2WnjwSv3
帶出角色支線140Please respect copyright.PENANAUFIXONDo8a
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破140Please respect copyright.PENANAafj0mIgQxj
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫140Please respect copyright.PENANAbKcpU7m5zL
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴140Please respect copyright.PENANAwkyKYV1hLd
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌140Please respect copyright.PENANAkZEVsdWiEx
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊140Please respect copyright.PENANAbBDNDxBgdY
殺人犯vs富婆140Please respect copyright.PENANAaQYO0YfeBK
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌140Please respect copyright.PENANAfSiyraVBeG
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴140Please respect copyright.PENANA18Z00hU3kE
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕140Please respect copyright.PENANA6zPKzzAgO9
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。140Please respect copyright.PENANADxHN7XzhnG
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。140Please respect copyright.PENANA0DqRuxsl17
魂之詩140Please respect copyright.PENANAELPBGOwjuk
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