
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』295Please respect copyright.PENANAfYdJy3uzkV
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:295Please respect copyright.PENANAOWvhp7WDFH
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐295Please respect copyright.PENANAlzqKyNgilP
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆295Please respect copyright.PENANAbOTiPJZfsK
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲295Please respect copyright.PENANAbXOnc2dyE8
帶出角色支線295Please respect copyright.PENANAeAwzAZs0km
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破295Please respect copyright.PENANAtm6puyB2bz
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫295Please respect copyright.PENANAS51qBv6Ecm
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴295Please respect copyright.PENANAS2GFtx604E
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌295Please respect copyright.PENANAfqeZCLG1OO
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊295Please respect copyright.PENANArfLRehG6Qj
殺人犯vs富婆295Please respect copyright.PENANAtKEUeMCli6
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌295Please respect copyright.PENANAgF12mYfANS
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴295Please respect copyright.PENANANlEFlCOqch
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕295Please respect copyright.PENANAy6bJWXZZTw
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。295Please respect copyright.PENANAKeq0LVLAkM
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。295Please respect copyright.PENANAPD7FUgfFhn
魂之詩295Please respect copyright.PENANAH9SZG50qSJ
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