《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHInuoT9La2
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq5ejh5rhKB
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGmjWoaGkdi
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXKDkVsva69
而是是人在食用時能入口即化191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYuZQLlm2Os
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdCBcFbWDcw
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtq8CakqVk4
使人不會因為時間的洪流191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsA9QuFGrJI
失去了炙熱191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQwVZj9e96D
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaEEDKJ6lEo
但夏季怎麼會有雪191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNIhjvrd6Z4
令人加以反思191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMEWupCx7TH
雪季不該有的畫面191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIDkNHwAXld
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4kdx8wgWd4
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或許191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcjHRSQWvXx
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAly6o3ehaj
即便是來年191Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp2yRNuAKSq
之後的每一年都依然如此
