《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE2zBcrZ2l9
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh6SaQUgugS
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgdFWE8zE3Q
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBjI6RY4H2q
而是是人在食用時能入口即化227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡADLicdfiJ9
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuT9iznLqG1
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBnevcyLMcl
使人不會因為時間的洪流227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF9srwnPAey
失去了炙熱227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1G2dR9ut5h
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYgJXSxp1uh
但夏季怎麼會有雪227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ9EGmxxWVu
令人加以反思227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeFYKccrpCN
雪季不該有的畫面227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE8DWmrTjcR
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeC2Ur2Ry9Q
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或許227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBBLz7k9ISj
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡccl04gPOrT
即便是來年227Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIBmIYeQY8N
之後的每一年都依然如此
