感謝各位的投稿!224Please respect copyright.PENANAR1WXUy9Ah2
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!224Please respect copyright.PENANAXxmvgPK3a2
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~224Please respect copyright.PENANAsXXdI0bEgD
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法224Please respect copyright.PENANAtWJGt3XCjs
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!224Please respect copyright.PENANAfRGxHCnl3Q
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!224Please respect copyright.PENANAmlKYHhD0QM
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》224Please respect copyright.PENANAjZyZi4Hhb7
(兼人氣獎得主)224Please respect copyright.PENANAcjvSQqzwqV
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD224Please respect copyright.PENANAOAvQ1UEJfT
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W224Please respect copyright.PENANAEfaTnCeqTr
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!224Please respect copyright.PENANAZ6jitkLTOB
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」224Please respect copyright.PENANAaxDKaMZqZC
結果後續結尾意外二連發!224Please respect copyright.PENANAeYf714SXrS
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意224Please respect copyright.PENANAAB6jRJ87xb
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺224Please respect copyright.PENANAOYmCo4WNbl
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事224Please respect copyright.PENANAody9V9HDJT
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》224Please respect copyright.PENANArfHHOnKTwF
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD224Please respect copyright.PENANAe0Rk6Vd3Vj
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯224Please respect copyright.PENANAb43lYLmX2f
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣224Please respect copyright.PENANApjSLsjOKaZ
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD224Please respect copyright.PENANAPz72nkGuHI
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~224Please respect copyright.PENANAEROOdL34HJ
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?224Please respect copyright.PENANAUOS41SEILk
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文224Please respect copyright.PENANAf6gSvsXeI2
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:224Please respect copyright.PENANA7GpIEHjfNF
這個名次是最難抉擇的224Please respect copyright.PENANAwwNfASp5wh
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態224Please respect copyright.PENANANM4hhKFF3h
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧224Please respect copyright.PENANASyDVpc9orV
以發佈順序點評:224Please respect copyright.PENANAbOXGRW8TkR
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》224Please respect copyright.PENANAbvZxmA5ZUf
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底224Please respect copyright.PENANAFo1l5YBFrn
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END224Please respect copyright.PENANAtkiIq0Hxbg
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺224Please respect copyright.PENANAHGqbKyTTFD
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案224Please respect copyright.PENANA7s8hle5jK5
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w224Please respect copyright.PENANAmu60iFPCIo
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖224Please respect copyright.PENANAWTIhNCF9u7
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到224Please respect copyright.PENANAFC5qsVvVxL
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》224Please respect copyright.PENANAxgGpaNSsjE
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!224Please respect copyright.PENANAE31WieyEPu
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點224Please respect copyright.PENANAPSq4N3aMr9
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD224Please respect copyright.PENANA11B7C2o1Yz
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)224Please respect copyright.PENANAPeggCOAzGW
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒224Please respect copyright.PENANAQhtcPKFunF
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚224Please respect copyright.PENANAoHgZ7CIGXD
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失224Please respect copyright.PENANAo2eD4JYz0g
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了224Please respect copyright.PENANAoW5Ug8GsG2
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性224Please respect copyright.PENANAEfTP6h7eB8
例如:224Please respect copyright.PENANAbvq7NcUwhf
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢224Please respect copyright.PENANAtXKdT9CnYc
>放學忘記去放乖乖224Please respect copyright.PENANAJE7ARgFbkQ
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂224Please respect copyright.PENANADgHwuBq12c
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些224Please respect copyright.PENANADdLCcPBR0z
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性224Please respect copyright.PENANAG0bwIZtk3f
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》224Please respect copyright.PENANAdSHSIdcPrG
宛如聊齋的古風故事224Please respect copyright.PENANAwRXBQOhgak
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?224Please respect copyright.PENANAp9Ug9lmvX1
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋224Please respect copyright.PENANAZnJNHN0l50
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)224Please respect copyright.PENANARfwidmf9BC
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?224Please respect copyright.PENANAwlv97KZJz5
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度224Please respect copyright.PENANAO1C07TQdxo
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD224Please respect copyright.PENANAcOZ2Zhanxv
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌224Please respect copyright.PENANAUHfcNmELn4
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了224Please respect copyright.PENANA83IdxpB2Mx
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞224Please respect copyright.PENANAtiVaxX3zAA
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間224Please respect copyright.PENANABZAhld9zUz
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠224Please respect copyright.PENANABVuoj6twIZ
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖224Please respect copyright.PENANAiRlZzJL0GA
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒224Please respect copyright.PENANAQoepkbAVdZ
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說224Please respect copyright.PENANA4y3ZJxw3lJ
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》224Please respect copyright.PENANA9MCuEr8vzc
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞224Please respect copyright.PENANAipF7KVUwof
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!