感謝各位的投稿!459Please respect copyright.PENANANXdvhzrRAz
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!459Please respect copyright.PENANAcY7Zv99ReE
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~459Please respect copyright.PENANATPBi7u4TpW
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法459Please respect copyright.PENANAekjNuQULPr
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!459Please respect copyright.PENANAHIubVRFnTL
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!459Please respect copyright.PENANAEpQ8B228Tn
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》459Please respect copyright.PENANANSXKg1VUsQ
(兼人氣獎得主)459Please respect copyright.PENANAHxrcdfbAnL
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD459Please respect copyright.PENANAGxSWSOWkln
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W459Please respect copyright.PENANAmCgu757oYp
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!459Please respect copyright.PENANAoi0sQWnr7U
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」459Please respect copyright.PENANA3EduqoBcqW
結果後續結尾意外二連發!459Please respect copyright.PENANA1itP1Bk6Xm
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意459Please respect copyright.PENANAvxOqeNaUq7
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺459Please respect copyright.PENANAK5soYvo7dF
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事459Please respect copyright.PENANAGAPm3CUOYP
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》459Please respect copyright.PENANAQIzHSdIYRP
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD459Please respect copyright.PENANAd6qt30eFo1
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯459Please respect copyright.PENANA3tGmZ9Hjih
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣459Please respect copyright.PENANAGqCNJuHyWV
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD459Please respect copyright.PENANAjcEwDRbTKG
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~459Please respect copyright.PENANAj61GV95vxA
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?459Please respect copyright.PENANAjYTLZHyMxn
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文459Please respect copyright.PENANALMlPGmle3o
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:459Please respect copyright.PENANAqsSVlRQGth
這個名次是最難抉擇的459Please respect copyright.PENANAIjKh4PyNYY
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態459Please respect copyright.PENANASV02UB4EOd
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧459Please respect copyright.PENANAvDAEw9sBui
以發佈順序點評:459Please respect copyright.PENANAscdoDS2g5w
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》459Please respect copyright.PENANAvUeQXOpysC
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底459Please respect copyright.PENANAlS4cElxs2O
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END459Please respect copyright.PENANAtKW9L6OUeJ
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺459Please respect copyright.PENANAhlESFLx5Va
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案459Please respect copyright.PENANAJcy7L73SYm
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w459Please respect copyright.PENANAJlzVAOwjPW
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖459Please respect copyright.PENANASQKt5OLBYg
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到459Please respect copyright.PENANAdTrCOPLG3z
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》459Please respect copyright.PENANAxdncp1XraY
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!459Please respect copyright.PENANAzhdMi9utQt
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點459Please respect copyright.PENANAx6S7tBK6BW
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD459Please respect copyright.PENANA86h8Dl6siN
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)459Please respect copyright.PENANA0dPBSELWKp
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒459Please respect copyright.PENANA3OnbIqfTry
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚459Please respect copyright.PENANAE7NzH6OQVt
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失459Please respect copyright.PENANAf4VWYtZlIM
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了459Please respect copyright.PENANA3lmZHz0Kqz
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性459Please respect copyright.PENANAHNi6iApAgY
例如:459Please respect copyright.PENANAwgl8w7fZwp
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢459Please respect copyright.PENANAmCsifIXrRV
>放學忘記去放乖乖459Please respect copyright.PENANAX09K6z0LUQ
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂459Please respect copyright.PENANAuzG8RcwSHh
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些459Please respect copyright.PENANACJpsFBKDe4
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性459Please respect copyright.PENANAe4u2M1igT0
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》459Please respect copyright.PENANAOeakNiLSWm
宛如聊齋的古風故事459Please respect copyright.PENANAehIHR3TeXg
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?459Please respect copyright.PENANAVXDqPHlYoi
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋459Please respect copyright.PENANAM9F6GB9oaW
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)459Please respect copyright.PENANA2YK6aPQkZj
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?459Please respect copyright.PENANAJu2orhrHpP
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度459Please respect copyright.PENANAp9DAPvqHnu
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD459Please respect copyright.PENANALjE9QvN4dC
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌459Please respect copyright.PENANA5Ayiar2RFo
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了459Please respect copyright.PENANAXrMO9d1ELJ
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞459Please respect copyright.PENANAQCW7yByA7Y
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間459Please respect copyright.PENANAOdH8r9j2o1
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠459Please respect copyright.PENANACmpF54BaMV
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖459Please respect copyright.PENANArawR0KG7HQ
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒459Please respect copyright.PENANAUyuiSYsRwX
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說459Please respect copyright.PENANAo2Bi8tiPkC
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》459Please respect copyright.PENANAXwQY7LyWB7
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞459Please respect copyright.PENANAaREQcZmYnf
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!