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在這方空間內,時間流動速度如轉動中的摩天輪。473Please respect copyright.PENANAjRi2r0qTIu
車廂內站著的人們擠得像沙丁魚,坐著的人們也瑟縮著,凜冽的寒風刮著車身,刮著人們的頭髮,刮著人們的耳後。473Please respect copyright.PENANAWl1wXi7GeD
當中一個少女用手機傳送著短訊,陽光照得她柔軟的髮絲烏亮了起來,長髮掩了她的小耳。473Please respect copyright.PENANABWB02TOtph
上面的木屑如沙粒滴下,落在乘客厚重的衣服上。473Please respect copyright.PENANA7zMPdDnTO8
須臾,碎屑愈來愈密。突然傳來一聲震耳欲聾的巨響。上層的部分辟里啪拉的坍塌下來。473Please respect copyright.PENANA0ynFubOaIv
「叮……叮……」的聲音靜止了,世界靜默了。473Please respect copyright.PENANA2xN7WuYvBH
鮮血染了車廂,飄揚了腥甜。473Please respect copyright.PENANAu1z7TDDhlY
人們淒厲的哀號,驚異的餘悸,急遽的心跳,費力地呼吸著,爭取漸稀薄的空氣。473Please respect copyright.PENANAEzJ86wtELA
少女的半張臉綻放瑰紅色的薔薇,在電車的上層崩塌的一瞬間,她的瞳瞥我一眼,她的幼臂伸向我。473Please respect copyright.PENANAaLIjxfhC6J
可是,她抓不著我。473Please respect copyright.PENANAL6RavRc99A
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