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No Plagiarism!FlQXrwzFSmxaktDG5yUDposted on PENANA 我02/14/2023西洋情人節這天,註冊成為Penana的一份子。8964 copyright protection216PENANAdqMeMZhNxr 維尼
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之前我小說、童話、新詩、漫畫、塗鴉、隨筆等,均上架於鏡文學網站——當然,以後仍是——註冊Penana,是想多一處可以擺放我作品的地方。8964 copyright protection216PENANAH83amnCsns 維尼
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至於怎麽知道Penana這個網站的?8964 copyright protection216PENANARgYeeZxlTo 維尼
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是因為,某天鏡文學來了一些從Penana過來的作者,也帶了一批讀者來互動,由於鏡文學的最新留言,在首頁可以看到,所以我知道了Penana這個網站,出於好奇,所以就過來註冊啦。8964 copyright protection216PENANAVO3nO8DEmO 維尼
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沒想到一來就發現,這裡太好玩了,特別是「創作挑戰」,讓我玩得不亦樂乎!加上大家的互動熱絡又有趣,我都捨不得離開,如果打開最近我電腦Chrome的歷史記錄,肯定是一片黃澄澄的P字。8964 copyright protection216PENANAUJ4RMu9IMy 維尼
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我在02/18寫了〈發現 Penana〉,收錄在《W. H. 新詩集》—— 這首詩,是我對這個心/新遊樂場的小小感想。以下是〈發現 Penana〉全文:8964 copyright protection216PENANAMkQty75pRn 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉8964 copyright protection216PENANAAxzMNFxM6s 維尼
西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection216PENANA9EVXdKzPTg 維尼
沒人給我金莎8964 copyright protection216PENANANqH9Kiz0UV 維尼
也沒人給我花8964 copyright protection216PENANAsZiH31TVsL 維尼
待在電腦螢幕前的我8964 copyright protection216PENANA0mLnGiR4dl 維尼
握著滑鼠8964 copyright protection216PENANArE38mSVFSq 維尼
在網上衝浪8964 copyright protection216PENANAphsgXirLa0 維尼
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落水、8964 copyright protection216PENANAcDHQjkBasB 維尼
爬上、8964 copyright protection216PENANAVkWCgjLJzC 維尼
越浪!8964 copyright protection216PENANAnkab1EiFYq 維尼
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一股網文巨浪襲來8964 copyright protection216PENANATG1NlD58h6 維尼
快要相撞⋯8964 copyright protection216PENANAP8i1KcxmQq 維尼
快要相撞!8964 copyright protection216PENANAk4dlmwxgg6 維尼
我做了一個烏龜翻8964 copyright protection216PENANA5xKLtGhcei 維尼
來到奇妙的地方:8964 copyright protection216PENANAf3QY2XCQH7 維尼
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書海8964 copyright protection216PENANAnI3n2LLt9G 維尼
字海8964 copyright protection216PENANAh6VgazsJ2d 維尼
線條海8964 copyright protection216PENANAfZGi8OSR7h 維尼
還有8964 copyright protection216PENANA2xH2GF4C9V 維尼
活潑的創意8964 copyright protection216PENANAJc8ukeRguj 維尼
自由的心靈8964 copyright protection216PENANAUBZ29f1NGA 維尼
歡樂的交流8964 copyright protection216PENANAZRpyleGRtC 維尼
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滿滿滿滿8964 copyright protection216PENANAxUAU6gJfWp 維尼
一大片汪洋8964 copyright protection216PENANAisM0tH9PXJ 維尼
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美人魚風姿綽約游過8964 copyright protection216PENANA7Oh8g4aaGF 維尼
海星是她的髮夾8964 copyright protection216PENANA7XZlHnLTGb 維尼
章魚噴出一幅潑墨畫8964 copyright protection216PENANAG3vVu16IOT 維尼
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我騎著衝浪板8964 copyright protection216PENANAvaCEJQDDqy 維尼
在這片大海徜徉8964 copyright protection216PENANAbzOEUu4SeX 維尼
這是我新的遊園地8964 copyright protection216PENANAWRygrh4NHE 維尼
這是我心的遊樂場8964 copyright protection216PENANAa2yfRgqEl4 維尼
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玩著玩著8964 copyright protection216PENANAosx3itm3K3 維尼
我都不想回家啦8964 copyright protection216PENANAysjCBx6SEn 維尼
欸,不是8964 copyright protection216PENANA5h7ZMwIZsJ 維尼
我不是正在家?8964 copyright protection216PENANAZfn3x89RKr 維尼
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叮咚叮咚8964 copyright protection216PENANAr6iv7HgFF8 維尼
門鈴忽然一響8964 copyright protection216PENANAbrhapBswrZ 維尼
我放下衝浪板,啊,8964 copyright protection216PENANAjb9bHitNm7 維尼
是滑鼠8964 copyright protection216PENANAKEe2GtfghP 維尼
開啟自家鐵門8964 copyright protection216PENANAAsrVZBbhYg 維尼
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「情人節快樂!」8964 copyright protection216PENANAWmVjCMS9fj 維尼
情人拿了一串8964 copyright protection216PENANADIvleRmvgZ 維尼
黃澄澄的香蕉進來8964 copyright protection216PENANAaVGmDx0pnz 維尼
「我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection216PENANAacRi7HZAAf 維尼
這是妳的最愛~」8964 copyright protection216PENANAf1ZZuOtyoi 維尼
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我接過香蕉,凝視它們8964 copyright protection216PENANAbzXNzMOitG 維尼
美麗的顏色8964 copyright protection216PENANAXWvRn210PQ 維尼
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深呼吸,馥郁的氣味8964 copyright protection216PENANArAzUFOIfKi 維尼
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一種甜香8964 copyright protection216PENANAXcxbLC4d6y 維尼
是將創意栽下8964 copyright protection216PENANAT5k0tp4e7J 維尼
時時照拂8964 copyright protection216PENANAHLVZGXOtLP 維尼
培育而成8964 copyright protection216PENANAKI25aWJOb4 維尼
甜美果實的8964 copyright protection216PENANAJHbZ5b7g33 維尼
芬芳8964 copyright protection216PENANARpP7VAlz34 維尼
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「好,我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection216PENANAaygdohCNzn 維尼
然後,我要繼續飛翔!」8964 copyright protection216PENANAKpf1QTb751 維尼
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「飛翔?」8964 copyright protection216PENANAeswtonQ0pm 維尼
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「嗯,跟你說,8964 copyright protection216PENANAadI5KBsV8P 維尼
我今天在網上8964 copyright protection216PENANACpbzKgMN8u 維尼
找到一個好玩的地方⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection216PENANADqOgEZJOyB 維尼
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情人和我一道8964 copyright protection216PENANA1UtLuresCL 維尼
走進廚房8964 copyright protection216PENANAR0ruS09BCp 維尼
在西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection216PENANAywTQGGnl5u 維尼
我打算帶他8964 copyright protection216PENANA45SurQvF9X 維尼
在海裡飛翔8964 copyright protection216PENANAPeQ7whD1Cv 維尼
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就在我新發現的8964 copyright protection216PENANAvFBe4wEgi1 維尼
心靈遊樂場。8964 copyright protection216PENANAA5gPxM2PGG 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉的創作背景及方式,我寫在留言區,也跟大家分享:8964 copyright protection216PENANAWHz6DYi6tc 維尼
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「這是我第一次寫這麼長的詩(高中寫的不算),這首〈發現 Penana〉是我來Penana玩了近5天的感想:好活潑的地方啊,尤其創作挑戰,讓我玩得好開心!220Please respect copyright.PENANA0Wc2gUTp9r
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雖說這首是「自由聯想詩」(自己覺得),不過裡面幾個概念/意象都有跡可循:西洋情人節、網上衝浪、書海/字海/線條海、香蕉、遊樂場。220Please respect copyright.PENANAHIZRQPHKbK
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我喜歡詩和現實「若即若離」的特性,這些意象也有,譬如衝浪,我用了真實世界的衝浪詞彙:落水、爬上、越浪(我很喜歡這個詞~)、烏龜翻(碰到大浪時,將衝浪長板頂在上面,從浪的下方穿過去,然後再翻/爬回板上)⋯⋯來指涉網路上的衝浪(surfing the net),有一種虛實相生的趣味。220Please respect copyright.PENANAc2RsO6L0jt
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順道一提,我完全不會衝浪——我運動苦手啊——這些概念是從網上衝浪得來的,如果有誤,煩請告知,但請勿噴~謝啦^^8964 copyright protection216PENANAUGW2jAeTN9 維尼
香蕉也是。220Please respect copyright.PENANA8VhrlfJ5wR
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我用真實世界的香蕉,來指涉Penana,之後還要做/坐「香蕉『船』」再去遨遊書海/字海/線條海呢!220Please respect copyright.PENANAROGbeOPOr2
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這首詩最讓我發噱的一句是「我接過香蕉,凝視它們」,我光想到「凝視香蕉」這個畫面,嘴角就忍不住失守;而後面寫的香蕉馥郁氣味,就是要帶出「創意➝栽下➝照拂➝培育➝成果➝芬芳」,這是真實世界果實,也是文字/圖畫世界作品的栽種過程。220Please respect copyright.PENANAnW3DAfDlQv
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又,《在海裡飛翔》是一部紀錄片,記錄海龜Feebee用25年遊遍整個大西洋的故事。」8964 copyright protection216PENANAt1FC96mJ8w 維尼
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很高興自己找到一個這麼好玩的地方,就算之後蜜月期過去,或是自己的「不定性」又開始發作,至少目前我玩得很愉快,也已經在此寫了一些原生(=不是從其他網站搬過來的作品)的新詩&小說/故事。8964 copyright protection216PENANAdAygJJZIKe 維尼
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我覺得我的「恐怖故事寫輪眼」快要打開了,不少發想正蠢蠢欲動,希望能將它們化成文字(我沒本事將其圖像化~),一一生出來!8964 copyright protection216PENANA012aWToZHk 維尼
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