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No Plagiarism!YaWl6GkIybetDFb2rPJ0posted on PENANA 我02/14/2023西洋情人節這天,註冊成為Penana的一份子。8964 copyright protection194PENANAIIh7jQpyPJ 維尼
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之前我小說、童話、新詩、漫畫、塗鴉、隨筆等,均上架於鏡文學網站——當然,以後仍是——註冊Penana,是想多一處可以擺放我作品的地方。8964 copyright protection194PENANAFRrf7rHXfH 維尼
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至於怎麽知道Penana這個網站的?8964 copyright protection194PENANAGI57cqIDeB 維尼
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是因為,某天鏡文學來了一些從Penana過來的作者,也帶了一批讀者來互動,由於鏡文學的最新留言,在首頁可以看到,所以我知道了Penana這個網站,出於好奇,所以就過來註冊啦。8964 copyright protection194PENANApGdg70ChJ4 維尼
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沒想到一來就發現,這裡太好玩了,特別是「創作挑戰」,讓我玩得不亦樂乎!加上大家的互動熱絡又有趣,我都捨不得離開,如果打開最近我電腦Chrome的歷史記錄,肯定是一片黃澄澄的P字。8964 copyright protection194PENANA4Z5LrgSAB8 維尼
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我在02/18寫了〈發現 Penana〉,收錄在《W. H. 新詩集》—— 這首詩,是我對這個心/新遊樂場的小小感想。以下是〈發現 Penana〉全文:8964 copyright protection194PENANAGJpJA0S8XW 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉8964 copyright protection194PENANAxtzBZqqjBK 維尼
西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection194PENANADqR0NXjutk 維尼
沒人給我金莎8964 copyright protection194PENANAhivTldlG8Z 維尼
也沒人給我花8964 copyright protection194PENANASvuebnv6Z9 維尼
待在電腦螢幕前的我8964 copyright protection194PENANAQnaey8Kzo5 維尼
握著滑鼠8964 copyright protection194PENANAK4uYE6pdbp 維尼
在網上衝浪8964 copyright protection194PENANAPDTyrbFwdJ 維尼
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落水、8964 copyright protection194PENANA23XW6nuOJY 維尼
爬上、8964 copyright protection194PENANAZYYyjTP3oj 維尼
越浪!8964 copyright protection194PENANAV5CWjeEw2g 維尼
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一股網文巨浪襲來8964 copyright protection194PENANAXfYnjPSz6B 維尼
快要相撞⋯8964 copyright protection194PENANAG0kkrzlkBJ 維尼
快要相撞!8964 copyright protection194PENANABday7OC6ov 維尼
我做了一個烏龜翻8964 copyright protection194PENANAymwV78GnoP 維尼
來到奇妙的地方:8964 copyright protection194PENANAveSlCF191w 維尼
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書海8964 copyright protection194PENANA2zVVpfClMK 維尼
字海8964 copyright protection194PENANAwkjQVH5SlE 維尼
線條海8964 copyright protection194PENANA2J4nAmo19f 維尼
還有8964 copyright protection194PENANAAwpueygyPi 維尼
活潑的創意8964 copyright protection194PENANABr59mGfBzW 維尼
自由的心靈8964 copyright protection194PENANAXBLJdQ5awa 維尼
歡樂的交流8964 copyright protection194PENANASOFBwA7kKt 維尼
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滿滿滿滿8964 copyright protection194PENANAaqmLxyBhFV 維尼
一大片汪洋8964 copyright protection194PENANAxNS1u8JGit 維尼
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美人魚風姿綽約游過8964 copyright protection194PENANALErkCNkIVj 維尼
海星是她的髮夾8964 copyright protection194PENANA40lxKXYL4r 維尼
章魚噴出一幅潑墨畫8964 copyright protection194PENANA9XscB23vog 維尼
紅珊瑚是落款章8964 copyright protection194PENANAtHyvTwC6I5 維尼
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我騎著衝浪板8964 copyright protection194PENANA34HtKynrHC 維尼
在這片大海徜徉8964 copyright protection194PENANA81Fuc23GK5 維尼
這是我新的遊園地8964 copyright protection194PENANAY1fChy2wFu 維尼
這是我心的遊樂場8964 copyright protection194PENANA9nbuT92j2R 維尼
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玩著玩著8964 copyright protection194PENANAaB1DEDZHEw 維尼
我都不想回家啦8964 copyright protection194PENANARG1Fa5ho4N 維尼
欸,不是8964 copyright protection194PENANA4q0kqQ75qQ 維尼
我不是正在家?8964 copyright protection194PENANAlDoxm8C3qe 維尼
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叮咚叮咚8964 copyright protection194PENANAEoFET9lEER 維尼
門鈴忽然一響8964 copyright protection194PENANA140aZbMIlh 維尼
我放下衝浪板,啊,8964 copyright protection194PENANAEXQ5PzcCZB 維尼
是滑鼠8964 copyright protection194PENANAvoQ2EvrxjD 維尼
開啟自家鐵門8964 copyright protection194PENANA5vQEgLXnhc 維尼
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「情人節快樂!」8964 copyright protection194PENANAsR1ciriNCh 維尼
情人拿了一串8964 copyright protection194PENANAAUtZsygnJv 維尼
黃澄澄的香蕉進來8964 copyright protection194PENANAEhSMkL88IC 維尼
「我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection194PENANAeq9uzFEUTZ 維尼
這是妳的最愛~」8964 copyright protection194PENANAbAbJLw5Pko 維尼
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我接過香蕉,凝視它們8964 copyright protection194PENANAtXIeKigpHa 維尼
美麗的顏色8964 copyright protection194PENANAicuGakgx7A 維尼
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深呼吸,馥郁的氣味8964 copyright protection194PENANAEigwyPqVnU 維尼
衝進腦門8964 copyright protection194PENANADc0DHA8zCH 維尼
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一種甜香8964 copyright protection194PENANAF3biVbBFz8 維尼
是將創意栽下8964 copyright protection194PENANAz00zXO14Kn 維尼
時時照拂8964 copyright protection194PENANAgX954UKIrY 維尼
培育而成8964 copyright protection194PENANA1V16HuXcjY 維尼
甜美果實的8964 copyright protection194PENANAe461RoIFgR 維尼
芬芳8964 copyright protection194PENANAzEroUilFKF 維尼
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「好,我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection194PENANAQsRvQh9sTB 維尼
然後,我要繼續飛翔!」8964 copyright protection194PENANAk3aayU59Jm 維尼
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「飛翔?」8964 copyright protection194PENANAJCNHS2NHfu 維尼
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「嗯,跟你說,8964 copyright protection194PENANAJrOyrneX1j 維尼
我今天在網上8964 copyright protection194PENANARkJ0JCGDFV 維尼
找到一個好玩的地方⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection194PENANAcYBQnujdFo 維尼
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情人和我一道8964 copyright protection194PENANA5JPMgQ0XJx 維尼
走進廚房8964 copyright protection194PENANAuuOSyNQOI5 維尼
在西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection194PENANAAj13MBJTyM 維尼
我打算帶他8964 copyright protection194PENANA6rHBK0LoQk 維尼
在海裡飛翔8964 copyright protection194PENANAK0GvMAaYrB 維尼
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就在我新發現的8964 copyright protection194PENANAukwIdCkGrx 維尼
心靈遊樂場。8964 copyright protection194PENANAvzPVubCafn 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉的創作背景及方式,我寫在留言區,也跟大家分享:8964 copyright protection194PENANAZNlKzLI2yF 維尼
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「這是我第一次寫這麼長的詩(高中寫的不算),這首〈發現 Penana〉是我來Penana玩了近5天的感想:好活潑的地方啊,尤其創作挑戰,讓我玩得好開心!198Please respect copyright.PENANAO4fmZhZMCe
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雖說這首是「自由聯想詩」(自己覺得),不過裡面幾個概念/意象都有跡可循:西洋情人節、網上衝浪、書海/字海/線條海、香蕉、遊樂場。198Please respect copyright.PENANAuL1X6TjzUa
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我喜歡詩和現實「若即若離」的特性,這些意象也有,譬如衝浪,我用了真實世界的衝浪詞彙:落水、爬上、越浪(我很喜歡這個詞~)、烏龜翻(碰到大浪時,將衝浪長板頂在上面,從浪的下方穿過去,然後再翻/爬回板上)⋯⋯來指涉網路上的衝浪(surfing the net),有一種虛實相生的趣味。198Please respect copyright.PENANAUHXIwJZSHt
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順道一提,我完全不會衝浪——我運動苦手啊——這些概念是從網上衝浪得來的,如果有誤,煩請告知,但請勿噴~謝啦^^8964 copyright protection194PENANASVfVzArriq 維尼
香蕉也是。198Please respect copyright.PENANAClBgcFK3CK
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我用真實世界的香蕉,來指涉Penana,之後還要做/坐「香蕉『船』」再去遨遊書海/字海/線條海呢!198Please respect copyright.PENANAjphOpbmXLb
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這首詩最讓我發噱的一句是「我接過香蕉,凝視它們」,我光想到「凝視香蕉」這個畫面,嘴角就忍不住失守;而後面寫的香蕉馥郁氣味,就是要帶出「創意➝栽下➝照拂➝培育➝成果➝芬芳」,這是真實世界果實,也是文字/圖畫世界作品的栽種過程。198Please respect copyright.PENANASPFriPY5uQ
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又,《在海裡飛翔》是一部紀錄片,記錄海龜Feebee用25年遊遍整個大西洋的故事。」8964 copyright protection194PENANAVwpOVHbrYW 維尼
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很高興自己找到一個這麼好玩的地方,就算之後蜜月期過去,或是自己的「不定性」又開始發作,至少目前我玩得很愉快,也已經在此寫了一些原生(=不是從其他網站搬過來的作品)的新詩&小說/故事。8964 copyright protection194PENANAeMGsadHaPi 維尼
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我覺得我的「恐怖故事寫輪眼」快要打開了,不少發想正蠢蠢欲動,希望能將它們化成文字(我沒本事將其圖像化~),一一生出來!8964 copyright protection194PENANAyDqKLPiiQG 維尼
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