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The Time Killers
Co-Writer ShadowBobcat10*
Beta Reader Junes
Full House
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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The Time Killers

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The Time Killers

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Rose and Belladonna

ShadowBobcat10
Comments ( 10 )
Kitty - 'Great Time War'? Reminds me of Doctor Who.
4 years ago
ShadowBobcat10 - I haven't actually watched Dr. Who, but the "Great Time War" has something to do with people murdering others left and right to gain immortality. I'll probably talk more about it later, too.
4 years ago
Lata - Awesome! I loved how you used a Time Catcher to talk about the different types of time killers. And I really like Ms. Rose. She seems like a wonderful killer. 
4 years ago
ShadowBobcat10 - Thank you. There's going to be plenty more of Ms. Rose next chapter (this story's a multi-parter).
4 years ago
Lata - @ShadowBobcat10, Yeah, I kinda figured that one out with the title. Belladonna is an excellent name for a killer, really good one.
4 years ago
ShadowBobcat10 - @Lata, Thank you! Ms. Belladonna is coming up. The characters are based on the main characters of RT's RWBY. Ms. Rose is Ruby and Weiss, while Ms. Belladonna is going to be Blake and Yang.
4 years ago
- You had some good world building in this chapter. There were a few mistakes, and some sentences were odd, but it's nothing an edit can't fix. I really want to know more about this world. It reminds me of the movie, "Out of Time." 
4 years ago
ShadowBobcat10 - Thank you for telling me about the odd sentences. I'd love it if you could show me with a "suggest edits." Feedback is the thing an author needs most :D
4 years ago
- @ShadowBobcat10, Sure! When I'm on my computer next time, I'll suggest the edits =)
4 years ago
ShadowBobcat10 - @Akaluv, :D
4 years ago
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