《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR9zfbE203b
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb9psJ4nfha
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEJia6GjDdv
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdTv82Wn2SM
而是是人在食用時能入口即化237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEdiJXYpKAJ
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7djLffRXTx
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLCeKksL8Zl
使人不會因為時間的洪流237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUaSHJvwGlQ
失去了炙熱237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡafJ42sk3C1
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAVqzE7SNWR
但夏季怎麼會有雪237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNmscG8PfsS
令人加以反思237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1cNWgfLn5a
雪季不該有的畫面237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2NLvkFxCaJ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB4lYEOSfOW
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或許237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡclfhMHaH2P
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJCFOVGAPub
即便是來年237Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTodt8uqYnA
之後的每一年都依然如此
