《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmUQiZf4xK5
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQIcaA8I8d7
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrRgKB8fbgk
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz3ZImMVwXs
而是是人在食用時能入口即化239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmZq37pwawJ
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz8CqQL6Z06
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrMoMCYrjgl
使人不會因為時間的洪流239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD1ETu3xLrC
失去了炙熱239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJNUu9xZxuZ
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQTsJt6ATm3
但夏季怎麼會有雪239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXpfikhlAFo
令人加以反思239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡecNFz0lfgZ
雪季不該有的畫面239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNHQfpVZFXz
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNjAJ7tlUQA
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或許239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXHv5vX7Ka9
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJVjMejncRz
即便是來年239Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm0BsKezc1O
之後的每一年都依然如此
