《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡExkdA23Ure
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSILI5lMddP
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyhbeCjc9oK
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoMlgH7f2PB
而是是人在食用時能入口即化172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBLeV9fwJEn
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUOJzmSJLXB
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHUKBZqzXf6
使人不會因為時間的洪流172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPOrOMrFdJe
失去了炙熱172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAbU5ANtgwF
172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTUx544roYU
詩名為《夏，冬眠》172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ67FzbUgGyD
但夏季怎麼會有雪172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdtGgBbxwQH
令人加以反思172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2LFmjpscqR
雪季不該有的畫面172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD0EKXGuCWj
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDAJazZHo2z
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或許172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLhLkVK0fRW
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbl1s4XUHUu
即便是來年172Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrRwKsfxxXw
之後的每一年都依然如此
