《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧202Please respect copyright.PENANAhjnqx4RsMm
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍202Please respect copyright.PENANAroId9t2r0N
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)202Please respect copyright.PENANAMyZ87QzQ8r
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單202Please respect copyright.PENANAhDuFa0oCig
而是是人在食用時能入口即化202Please respect copyright.PENANAqkwkMrM4dG
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」202Please respect copyright.PENANAycICLtyPY1
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久202Please respect copyright.PENANAzwRqfwCDEp
使人不會因為時間的洪流202Please respect copyright.PENANA7r29DGOXeL
失去了炙熱202Please respect copyright.PENANA0fNv7BHEvP
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》202Please respect copyright.PENANACBjQOIeAvP
但夏季怎麼會有雪202Please respect copyright.PENANAOdAlQxX6T6
令人加以反思202Please respect copyright.PENANASIkUFfdNVB
雪季不該有的畫面202Please respect copyright.PENANAs7AJyfU7pX
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏202Please respect copyright.PENANAbMtpZobclO
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或許202Please respect copyright.PENANA1ZRGzORgZu
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣202Please respect copyright.PENANARozIaBayYM
即便是來年202Please respect copyright.PENANA3pMlkaSpx1
之後的每一年都依然如此