《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD6WqR4P8lr
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBZWNQbNaeH
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlMqBjJfuGR
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6xHFu7AILw
而是是人在食用時能入口即化238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡma5Mss8zS7
238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhR0hhcEneo
「嘗試把心臟調慢」238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvVYaK7Wevz
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3Vim1x38iW
使人不會因為時間的洪流238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8rt3k6lskq
失去了炙熱238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAYjNsPvoVN
238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgoGsAMPKgD
詩名為《夏，冬眠》238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf8tqtv9Ae5
但夏季怎麼會有雪238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLtedxdxK3S
令人加以反思238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVhK8ZG8BbD
雪季不該有的畫面238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ56jBJtbiKz
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYpGjm4UT7G
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或許238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnZcTCL9ejt
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX7zGE5YBNH
即便是來年238Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaT8JAPV7MQ
之後的每一年都依然如此
