《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaDB9MX6gpO
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvtwKLQsTqi
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqN7dnZF3vr
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMNWcFpkEZW
而是是人在食用時能入口即化194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNgFtrXYAgX
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ57lLWlVR5n
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVtDywaFpJr
使人不會因為時間的洪流194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjVb8CUBlwm
失去了炙熱194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcCcOkUDfPH
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgdoVKHJwBh
但夏季怎麼會有雪194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5X3TakjxWB
令人加以反思194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnFO0Khsv1H
雪季不該有的畫面194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc1J5NdnX8z
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV4f07IpTkr
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或許194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsJQz7RkG0s
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡypAZw4BmCP
即便是來年194Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmFsfTycDrL
之後的每一年都依然如此
