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這部非常著重畫面、人物設計上的描寫,以及重點在於敘述過去和現在兩邊的時間線來表達主角是誰。但是呢,我覺得可以用一下分隔線來表現,也可以分拆出幾話來表達過去和現在兩邊的時間線,這樣讀者看起來會更舒服。163Please respect copyright.PENANAZfT7TaeCoJ
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這裡我可能要推一下黑正大大的《半蟲戰記》,黑正大大有分夢境和現實兩條線,但黑正大大分得較為清晰,相信可以看一下~163Please respect copyright.PENANAIp6WXYXyHC
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