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永玄您好,叔叔是愛聽故事,也愛說故事的「可鹹甜」。8964 copyright protection216PENANAuyWFiIZGcC 維尼
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拜讀閣下《劍骨流光》前五章,已有心得如下。8964 copyright protection216PENANARtbuu8Xwi7 維尼
不是叔叔喜歡的「標籤」,所以只讀五章,請見諒……8964 copyright protection216PENANA6wI1FFjCBj 維尼
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但是好看!光看上面那些有沒有嚇一跳?失去信心了!?8964 copyright protection216PENANAbhbs3J8pNt 維尼
莫慌~是真的好看~前面人物塑造的很好,如果說設定:劇情:人物的比例的話。8964 copyright protection216PENANAE8degTAcxw 維尼
閣下應該是1:2:7吧——人物塑造的非常好!8964 copyright protection216PENANAnNWJg1nrri 維尼
看不到劇情沒關係,因為文字順暢,會自由的閱讀下去,這樣說好了,光看這一家三口目前看起來就很有戲了QQ,尤其師姐搶戲!8964 copyright protection216PENANACUy6bwNZvw 維尼
人物好,光看他們日常就看得下去了~這是叔叔的想法~8964 copyright protection216PENANA6Z4B9vlTiB 維尼
穩重的師傅VS怯懦的師弟VS古靈精怪又小鼻子小眼睛小家子氣又愛撒嬌黏著師傅的師姐。8964 copyright protection216PENANAjpGaudXqxB 維尼
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有高人指點吧?排版順暢,文筆通順,沒有華麗的詞彙,但是可以鋪陳出想像的感覺,很剛好。具體而言可以說是,不需要敘述背景就可以知道在做啥之類的。8964 copyright protection216PENANArblpVlq99i 維尼
不過還是有些心得說說。8964 copyright protection216PENANAmWgo98Q8jZ 維尼
書皮可以再換一下,看看大橘的書皮~《入骨相思》BL/古風,有沒有輸一截的感覺?付費生成=>「子不語」8964 copyright protection216PENANA8OP5VqkdBL 維尼
簡介可以再想一下~8964 copyright protection216PENANAhps3Iy8S4J 維尼
如果目標是長篇,建議來個六、七萬字成一本書的量了,再大力宣傳。現在專心照這個節奏創作,不然會消耗前面的行銷能量,等待中可能會有讀者跑掉,這是高手的心得!8964 copyright protection216PENANAPFhLG09tl2 維尼
不過如果閣下日更就沒那問題QQ"8964 copyright protection216PENANAFmktyFBjhT 維尼
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以上為叔叔的讀者心得,或許可以再請其他貓貓夥伴看看是否有不同意見。8964 copyright protection216PENANAS8RX1Y2gVJ 維尼
重點!是值得投資的作品!8964 copyright protection216PENANA6vy4YrhyHb 維尼
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