寫作菜鳥日記 -12813Please respect copyright.PENANA5cdaA2LqAE
今天把第14章寫到五千字13Please respect copyright.PENANAtpQH0571tt
邊寫邊發現大綱要改,13Please respect copyright.PENANA2RhZZM2d83
然後好幾次都被自己的設定不夠周全給卡住,13Please respect copyright.PENANANEqOB1cNSw
或是糾結在一些不是很重要的問題,13Please respect copyright.PENANALWsovoDQiN
舉個例子,比如常見的日本影片,13Please respect copyright.PENANAM8UYr5wN1J
怪都只攻擊東京,13Please respect copyright.PENANAgoOIsHg7yi
主角可以直接迎戰。13Please respect copyright.PENANAXDbj0SjPLN
就不會攻擊例如名古屋還是秋田13Please respect copyright.PENANANTF4cSqjMa
(主角坐火車兩個小時後抵達,城市已夷為平地)13Please respect copyright.PENANAgoxbcjCP8E
其實好像可以不用管這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAhCU6W1Podl
但我太容易被這種奇怪問題影響,13Please respect copyright.PENANAVKYZJgwiaQ
一旦陷入焦躁就無法寫下去。13Please respect copyright.PENANA8b4H7j8vwg
最後還是花了點篇幅來解釋這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAdpVEKE2LuG
並且因此修改了大綱。13Please respect copyright.PENANAFq7Wc34O8m
另外一件事,前面的日常生活化描寫,13Please respect copyright.PENANAuLNxlLhs7o
雖然很有趣,13Please respect copyright.PENANAVlxDtJh4AB
但貼近現實角度的喜劇的調性有點走過頭了,13Please respect copyright.PENANA9yrWbxsyn1
只好再花一點篇幅拉回一些神話奇幻的調性,13Please respect copyright.PENANAs2csguQgEq
這章剩下的篇幅,13Please respect copyright.PENANAcTuAqBmN2l
應該是要寫那對已分手的情侶的後續,13Please respect copyright.PENANAIUg8uk4eq9
這可能要想一想,不想寫得太哀傷。13Please respect copyright.PENANAQAPtNeohQF
應該有更好的表現方式才對,13Please respect copyright.PENANAwUhd6vYEGP
把問題帶進夢裡吧,13Please respect copyright.PENANA8w8kYTfAM1
夢會給我答案的。