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Endless - Book 1
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Endless - Book 1
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Chapter 1
AlisiaLanet
Mar 13, 2017
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Comments ( 13 )

GreenZone - I never knew Flora was a floating island... *rubs back of neck*
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AlisiaLanet - Yea I didn't quite make that clear in the 1st revision on Deviantart -nervous laugh-
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GreenZone - @AlisiaLanet, mhmm... Still awesome though
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AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, ^_^ Yea and also btw all the islands in this region are floating islands. All 6 of them
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GreenZone - @AlisiaLanet, ALL OF THEM?! I thought that some of them were like, I don't know, on the ground as in below. It's cool though... XiaXia!!!
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AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, lol the 6 float and change height based on season to rotate their seasons ^^
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GreenZone - @AlisiaLanet, ahh, oh okay. That sounds pretty cool.
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AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, Thank you ^^
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Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - I feel like the chapter was a bit long, but it was an interesting start, and I'm curious where this will all go.
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AlisiaLanet - Yay! I'm so happy to hear! Um sorry for the length. I've tried to keep chapters short when doing the revisions. Anything you think carried for longer than it should have or any suggestions that could improve length yet keep it interesting?
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Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @AlisiaLanet, I think that the paragraph where the Emperor's  betrothed asks him to dance would be a good place to end chapter one, and the open chapter two with the paragraph where "The evening wore on."

You could add another split after he learns it's time, and the next paragraph would open chapter three with "It took a couple minutes."
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AlisiaLanet - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Hmm interesting suggestion. I will keep this in mind for the future when I'm formatting it for publication. ^_^
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Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @AlisiaLanet, Alright, glad I could help.
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