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Endless - Book 1
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Endless - Book 1
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Chapter 1
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Comments ( 13 )
Min-T-SugaR - I never knew Flora was a floating island... *rubs back of neck*
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - Yea I didn't quite make that clear in the 1st revision on Deviantart -nervous laugh-
2 years agoreply

Min-T-SugaR - @AlisiaLanet, mhmm... Still awesome though
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, ^_^ Yea and also btw all the islands in this region are floating islands. All 6 of them
2 years agoreply

Min-T-SugaR - @AlisiaLanet, ALL OF THEM?! I thought that some of them were like, I don't know, on the ground as in below. It's cool though... XiaXia!!!
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, lol the 6 float and change height based on season to rotate their seasons ^^
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Min-T-SugaR - @AlisiaLanet, ahh, oh okay. That sounds pretty cool.
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - @GraysonCharms, Thank you ^^
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - I feel like the chapter was a bit long, but it was an interesting start, and I'm curious where this will all go.
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - Yay! I'm so happy to hear! Um sorry for the length. I've tried to keep chapters short when doing the revisions. Anything you think carried for longer than it should have or any suggestions that could improve length yet keep it interesting?
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @AlisiaLanet, I think that the paragraph where the Emperor's  betrothed asks him to dance would be a good place to end chapter one, and the open chapter two with the paragraph where "The evening wore on."

You could add another split after he learns it's time, and the next paragraph would open chapter three with "It took a couple minutes."
2 years agoreply

AlisiaLanet - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Hmm interesting suggestion. I will keep this in mind for the future when I'm formatting it for publication. ^_^
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @AlisiaLanet, Alright, glad I could help.
2 years agoreply

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