I wrote this story as a part of an assignment. It was a couple of years ago in Eighth grade. The assignment was to create a short story about man vs nature or something like that. I hated my teacher for assigning me this but I actually don't hate her now I am really proud of this piece. I would love to hear your constructive criticism to help me become a better writer and to improve this story. Enjoy!
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