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The 13th Girl
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“Mistakes are the portals of discovery.” - James Joyce
Neeka River
Dec 7, 2017
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Nelso555 - I love the idea you have for this story. I would recommend working on your sentence structure to make it more fluent. Also, I like how you have a quote as your chapter title. Keep it up!
1 year agoreply

Neeka River - Thank you, I totally am working on improving the fluency of my sentence structure. 
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