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幕後黑手？
By 殤之兔子
殤之兔子
May 3, 2018
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瑟雷伊.幻夢 瑟雷伊.幻夢
羅衣 羅衣
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No Plagiarism!0qClFmu73aEcH5WKolBwposted on PＥNAＮＡ 「沒想到，你最後還是選擇自殺」

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「原本以為，只要這麼做就能讓你平安的過日子的，沒想到最後你還是想起來了」copyright protection71ＰＥＮＡＮＡUaOwvuT0CW

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Comments ( 10 )
阿蔥 - 這篇有股奇怪的氣味XD

字數其實可以在少點，能刪的盡量刪，比如說：「原本以為……你還是想起來了」這段我覺得可以刪掉，改成「抱歉沒能保護你，如果有來世我想守護你……」這樣也行吧！字數我是不知道有沒有超過啦！XD

以上是我的正常( ？)評論～
1 year ago ⋅ reply

羅衣 - 寫很好QQ
1 year ago ⋅ reply

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你這是在鼓勵人們不守規則啊！！！.
1 year ago ⋅ reply

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字數及內容完全不相符啊啊啊！！！
1 year ago ⋅ reply

殤之兔子 - 就說很爛嘛😂
1 year ago ⋅ reply

- @殤之兔子,
你完全不想修改嗎？?
1 year ago ⋅ reply

殤之兔子 - @熾緣 ◉ 悲雪,我連怎麼改都不知道
1 year ago ⋅ reply

- @殤之兔子,
........... 找一些跟你一起參賽的人教一下你吧....
1 year ago ⋅ reply

殤之兔子 - @熾緣 ◉ 悲雪,有時間就去請教
1 year ago ⋅ reply

- @殤之兔子,
好！
那麼這一篇我就先不評論了w
1 year ago ⋅ reply
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