When you're bored and your house smells really good but your food is not ready yet so you can't eat anything. D:
I just finished re-writing the first chapter of Raindrops, and I like it. I think it's better to explain the backround more of your story. I mean, as a writer you like get the big picture in your head first and I mean you know exactly what happened (or maybe you don't idk you can make it up if someone asks you) but no one else does so what's the point? I guess some things are just weird like that.
Like
Why was my longest chapter
About
Natalie ripping her pants
And having to get them735Please respect copyright.PENANAuWlEyzw32I
Sewn up?
Good Job, Ellis.
Ya did great.
Smh.
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