When you're bored and your house smells really good but your food is not ready yet so you can't eat anything. D:
I just finished re-writing the first chapter of Raindrops, and I like it. I think it's better to explain the backround more of your story. I mean, as a writer you like get the big picture in your head first and I mean you know exactly what happened (or maybe you don't idk you can make it up if someone asks you) but no one else does so what's the point? I guess some things are just weird like that.
Why was my longest chapter
Natalie ripping her pants
And having to get them600Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNEuhHLXYHo
Good Job, Ellis.
Ya did great.