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The Ticket
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Writer Barbara S
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Barbara S
Oct 4, 2015
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once upon a star - I think it's a nice and tight little story! Although there are a few minor typos, the story is easily relatable and it seems to develop into an interesting plot line bit by bit towards the end! I would love to know how it all goes!:)

I found that Enrique is a Spanish boy's name meaning 'Ruler of the Home' - was it a specially intended detail? I think it fits in quite well with the story!

Looking forward to the ending!:)
3 years agoreply

Barbara S - Thank you so much for your comment- I'll definitely try to finish it.PS - no I didn't have any idea about the meaning of the name - must be a coincidence.
3 years agoreply

once upon a star - No problem! Take your time!:) 
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