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Amongst Iron and Gems
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A Man Under Red Shadows
nicolzie
Jun 1, 2016
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jamber86 - Around the 61% mark you repeat a line... the close to the border one. I like this story.  The paising is really good. Also the plot logic makes sense while still maintaining mystery. A lot of stories on these sites have illogical plot points or you can read the plot early on.  My only problem is you do not update nearly enough, but I guess I can forgive that. 
2 years agoreply

nicolzie - Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll go back and fix that line ;) 
I am so happy to hear that you like my story! I will do my best to update it more often, especially since I'm entering summer vacation! Once again, thank you!
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