In the words of M. Williams
M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbMayqXdd3P
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk9YrOadJgB
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8K4mraNCNs
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKhObkSj3hW
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxWZyB1NA8g
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!637Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCaHdw6OAqj
Well done, Zak!
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