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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8oS3O1LELf
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt4R7ndS7PZ
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsicfl2KaRG
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6KzIj4J5vn
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwsoiXXxwmY
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!684Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfa9VLKjmgC
Well done, Zak!
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