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Day 1 of NaNoWriMo
bgjohnson2009
Nov 2, 2015
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Lata - This is really good. I loved how you described the crime scene. The clear contradiction between the white snow and the blood made it thrilling and chilly. 
2 years agoreply

J.M. Black - This is a great start! Crime Thrillers are such complicated stories because they are so detailed oriented. You did well in setting the scene and catching the reader's attention by starting right off with the first murder (that the reader knows of). 

Keep writing!
3 years agoreply

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