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The Funeral
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Contest Holder DarkWolf*
Challenger Kirishima Aoi
Challenger Bluemoon Scriptor
Challenger Ernest_Scribbler
Challenger Maryam
Challenger queen0fnothing
Challenger Tisha101101001
Challenger Tenshi no Yami
Challenger shadowmaven
Challenger Ciro
Challenger Chloe Quinn
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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#4

MY LOVED ONE !

Maryam
Dec 13, 2019
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118 Words
Comments ( 6 )
Maryam - @Tenshi no Yami can you tell me where are my grammatical error?
1 year ago
Tenshi no Yami - Well, for starters, most writings arent in all caps. That comes off moreso as yelling and Im not sure if thats what you were going for. There are a few typos and punctuation errors as well. 
1 year ago
Maryam - and thanks
1 year ago
Maryam - ok
1 year ago
Tenshi no Yami - Its fine that its short. My only suggestion is that you go back and do a grammatical check as some words are spelled wrong. 
1 year ago
Maryam - it is quite small.
sorry (
1 year ago
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